rate_review Reviews

Ravenhawk,
Your story is so good. Don't ever stop writing. You make it difficult to continue writing my novel. And I've only got a half a chapter to go.

Love the story. Reviewed a while back but wanted to let you know that it has progressed nicely. Definitely looking forward to more chapters.

Hello,
I've never reviewed one of these things before. I have always been a big Buffy fan, but Willow was always my favorite character. This should've happened in the series. (Rated pg-13 of course) The series would still be on. It was just wrong that Willow and Xander never got together for real. The premise is perfect.
The writing and imagination are excellent. It's amazing how many people write for this site, and cannot spell, or use proper grammar. I'm not an english teacher or anything, but I am half a chapter from finishing my novel, and I think bed spelling and grammar are a hell of a distraction. The writer (I'm sorry I didn't see the author's name) has captured the essence of the characters and is obviously a serious BtVS fan.
I've only read the first four chapters, but I plan to read them all ASAP. Please please please continue writing, and keep up the good work.

Thank you so very much.

Hello, it's me again. I check this story every day for updates so please don't stop.

I see you haven't thrown in any needless drama. I thank you for that. After a long day of hard work, I come home expecting to read stories that don't make me feel sad because of drama. Good job showing the growing love between the three, it's really touching. I just REALLY wish I was the Xanman right now. ;)

Anyways, this comment isn't as long as my last one. You seem to be learning and getting better. Keep up the good work. :)

Ok, here's a review for ya, keep em coming. this is some great work.

thanks for continuing an excellent story!

Nice Work! I really love the group dynamic!

This is easily one of my favorite fics.

Keep up the good work!

This is the first fanfic I have ever read and certainly the first adult fanfic. I thought you did a great job capturing the intimacy of the trio's moments without making it seem carnal. I was very impressed with your speech style for parts involving Joyce and Giles. your interpretation matched so closely I could hear thier voices in my head as I read the parts. I wonder how Anya would react to this change in Xanders life? I thought the only area that could have used improving was the nuances of idiosyncratic willow and Tara speak. Not that you did a bad job far from it, I merely offer that as insight to improve. If you are amenable to the idea might I also suggest a run in with Spike or possibly Angel and the reaction from the two of them. I would also like to caution against turning zander into any sort of witch or warlock as I think it is not in his character but perhaps making him a battery or amplifier for the witches would be appropriate. All in all this Author does a wonderful job placing a three way romance within the buffyverse.

You r an awesome story teller/writer. I'm greatly impressed with ur ability to blend the characters together in a strong emotional and passionate way. Willow has always been my favorite and to find her in this bi relationship triangle is absolutely excillerating. My girlfriend and her sister enjoy the same loving relationship and have read ur story numerous times often having same type sex while exploring each chapter.