rate_review Reviews

Has great potential....keep working on it!

Just a note about the odd characters, i'm not entirely sure why that's happening...maybe i'll try typing on a different program next time *puzzled grin*.

Great concept lots of potential- but somehow your story is so hard to read their are some odd characters that have intermingled with the text making it barely legible. Fix that and you've got a golden story my friend

Continue, this looks like a great story.

This is a fantastic idea and could be a very very good fic.
I actually quite like the title, it says a lot about where the story is heading etc etc so no need to change it.
I'm not sure if it's just me but there was a problem with the format (symbols replacing things etc).
Anyway please do continue...even if i had to wade through a page of symbol it would be worth it to see this story come about!
Like i said its a fantastic idea and this could be a truly fab story!

Is good, I like. Is better than many things I've been unfortunate enough to read on this site (though there are also many stories here that are good, I'm not saying that all of the authors here suck). Please, do continue, is a good plot.

wicked story. i cant wait for more of it to come.

oooh i like it...keep going...what will be the highest rating on this fic, does it gradually get higher or no ....and i like the title lol very creative