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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I hope, if Xander and Spike ever going have relationship, You will allow Xander be a top. He will need all of control of his life to be a strong-willing person, after what he went through. I hope, Spike will understand this also. For now, I so miserable, I just can't hold back my tears. You're so cruel to Xan. Please, make it better. Thanks.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please anya & buffy BITCHS!!!!!!!!!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit!!!
I'm liking it though
Was'nt really prepered for the extent of his injuries
Acually had'nt seen that bit with his mother komming!
Usally i can figure stuff like that out but you suprised me.
Lets just hope Spike kan fix him.
(They are uber qute together)
Keep upp the good work.
I'm liking it though
Was'nt really prepered for the extent of his injuries
Acually had'nt seen that bit with his mother komming!
Usally i can figure stuff like that out but you suprised me.
Lets just hope Spike kan fix him.
(They are uber qute together)
Keep upp the good work.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, can't wait for more. buffy and anya must be punished!!!!!!!!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. But please, for the sake of my little furry sanity, please proofread your work or find a beta. I highly recommend saving your work and walking away from the computer for a while. After a couple of hours (yes, I said hours) come back and reread what you've written. After that, then post. You'd be amazed how many mistakes you'll catch doing that. Again, good story.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is just mean please put the rest up as soon as you can!!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story anya must die!!!!! update soon very soon in other words NOW!!!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting idea, but you either need to proofread your work or get a beta. There are way to many grammatical mistakes in this story to make it a pleasurable read. It's hard to enjoy a story when I have to spend half my time trying to figure out what you're trying to say. I know everyone else is yelling, "more, more, more," but I'm saying, "proofread, proofread, proofread." You'd be amazed how much better your stories are if you take a little extra time to clean them up.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More More More PLEASE write more Please Please thank you
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES, PLEASE!! WRITE MORE AND SOON!! AND IF SPIKE HAS T KILL ANYA....OH WELL. LOL