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Anya and Buffy are bitches i hope something nasty happens to them and i love gentle Spike is being. Also his mother how about she maybe some unknown Deseto(sp. type of car that Spike has i think) hits repeatedly i personally like that idea but youre the author ssssssssssssoooooo please update thankyou

Interesting story so far, but if this takes place post S7 then Spike should have gotten the chip out.

They should have let Buffy stay dead the 1st time! Cuz if I recall correctly Buffy became twisted 2rd season. Just go ahead and check the 2rd season dvds! Angelus showing up made it worse! Did Buffy die in this for the 2rd time? Cuz after they bought her back she was a wreck. Why did Xander and Anya become involved in the 1st place? I'm okay with demons, as long they are nice! But Anya doesn't deserve Xander! She was a demon that hated men! It's her boyfriend's fault! The one whom Anya turned in a troll! He cheated on Anya! If not for him, D'Hoffryn wouldn't have approached her...If he hadn't, then no Anya-demon, and Anya would be long dead long before Xander was born! I saw Anya's past, and she was far worse than Halfrek was! Anya granted a wish, and Halfrek asked her if she regretted it something like that, Anya was cold as ice...

i love this story please write more very soon:):)

awesome chapter. i love how xander gets pleasure out of the smple things in life. i guess thats how u would be after being with the uber sluts. kind of seems strange how Angel just spat that out and hung up. he usually broods and broods some more. but u probably have a rason for that. i love where ur goin with this and i can't wait to see who of the x-men shows up. maybe make one of them family. maybe scott. i dunno xander and scott or xander and logan those guys just seem i dunno like they clisk. ok enough rambling u get writin!!!!! lol

This fic is great. Xander really likes chocolate youalmost always see him eat it. Please tell me when you update. Thank you.

This is a good story, but the tenses seem to go all over the place. I don't know, just seems a little hard to read. But I like it's a lot. <<< See don't trust me because I can't speak proper english.

Anyway GJ.

And Xander LOVES Twinkies. Don't forget the Twinkies.

Could you have Willow, Tara, Dawn, Giles, and/or the angel crew do somthing nasty to Buffy, Anya and X's mom? I LOVE seeing the bad guys suffer!!!!!!!

Having re-read story... (You can believe? Re-reading! I?m almost had heart-attack from first reading, in so much ache I was for Xander?s pain and humiliation and in so much hatred for Anya and Buffy!)
There are two things that intrigue me: Willow with her "I have paid for it on the credit card my folk got me." Huh? Her folk? What folk? Is that means Willow not human also? and Xander with his "It was okay though, Mommy was just making sure Xander didn?t become like his fairy Daddy." Fairy Daddy? What Daddy? From where? Xander is half-fairy?!!
And one more moment. It's what I was always thinking about Anya. Why Scooby thinks she is human? She was demon, trapped in human body because Giles has broken her demonic power source. But powerless demoness Anyanka still was in Anya body, with demonic moral and demonic tastes.

All I can say about the story is:

Tell of the Torture of Buffy and Anya at Dawn's hands. Or, better yet, have Giles and the Council
find out about everything and let them revoke Buffy's abilities. Then let D'Hoffryn at the three
women (Mrs Harris included). The three think men are evil, let them see what they've done to
Xander.

Otherwise the tale's great. Can't wait for the next installment.