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person *DB24*
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter update soon
person RageMore
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... that was HOT! And really, really frustrating, GAH!!! Of course I wouldn't have liked it any better if they just agreed they where in love w/each other and lived happily ever after either, I'm complicated like that. Still lovin what you've written so far. More please?
person M
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why? Why? Why? Why would you do this to me!?!?! I hate Mr. Greek. and Faith is being an idiot. Buffy needs to be MAD now she did nothing wrong. Love your story, but hate the way you leave me hanging. Hopefully Buffy and Faith will be together soon!!! Ciao, M
person Cristina
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, give me a second to recover from blinking and gawking in awe


Ok, I have now offically decided this is one of the best B/F fics I have ever read. Honestly. I love it. And I Was SO excited to see you updated, you have no idea.
This chapter was great. You wrote it very well. I can't help but fall into all of it and the action.
lol, I fell bad for the both of them. bad for Faith for the first that first few times with Buffy and how she felt to Buffy now and how misrable she was. Now she is so happy to get a moment with Faith only to have it ripped from her. I can feel the pain from both sides but can't help feel more for Buffy right now. If I were Buffy, I would be pissed too. Not only are you heartbroken, but the person you are heartbroken about it being an ass and thinking things that aren't true. They do all of these things and then yet, you can't. All you do is run into walls. And to deeply care about someone and yet can't at the same time and then see them with someone else? Ouch.

I like Toni. I normally don't like seeing the girls with other ppl, but you make your OCs likeable and write them very well. I also like how you write your story so it's not overly done. It's realistic and nice :)

Ok, I will shut up now, I think I babbled, lol. Anyway, great update. Thanks for always sticking with this story. It's a pleasure to read it. I can't wait to read more :) Keep up the great work!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't just leave me hanging please update soon!!
person tim
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well shit, maybe Buffy should be more like Faith and just embrace her growing relationship with Toni since Faith isn't willing to give her anything, but sex in the stairwell. great update, continue soon
person RageMore
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
It's been a while since I've read a Buffy/Faith story that truly caught my attention and held it the way this one has. You've captured both both Faith & Buffy's voices really well, and the story flows nicely. And although I always love to see the slayers "in love" 'cause I'm a romantic like that, I gotta say I'm loving the way you have this story going so far. It's a very welcome change from the many overly lovey and rather cheesy stories out there.

Thanx for a great read, and I really hope you will be adding more soon!
person cbscifijunky
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There you go throwing in a VERY likeable OC to confuse Buffy and this Fuffy shipper. Great update!
CB
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a GREAT chapter!!!
so long,so good!!!
im really happy for buffy, and its the first time that im hoping she wont get together with faith at the end,cause i know thatd just be hard and cause a lot of heartache,and also i really like this toni!!! just what buffy needs!
and thanks for the long chapter,i could get used to it!!!
person Cristina
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well yay for Buffy not being misrable at the end there. Upid faith for adding to her misery lol! Very good chapter! I am glad you updated. I can't wait to see where else you go with this :) keep up all the great work! :)