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Wow and finally there is a baby and yet I am not sure how to feel about that. At one point especially the chapter with the picnic, bunny and the cave a baby possibly being Buffy and Faith's sounded like a good idea, but now a Troy/ Faith baby sounds complicated. Can't wait for more.

Awesome update. Great cliffhanger (expected, of course) and great pacing. It moved fast enough to be very satisfying while still getting across the arduousness of the journey. Truly looking forward to more.

One a more general note, I wanted to tell you how much I really like Toni. I never find myself liking original characters in fanfiction as they almost always come across as too perfect. However, Toni's devotion, kindness and humor are offset by some real flaws and, at time, misguided notions. It makes me believe in her.

Everything about this fic is top notch. It's seriously the best thing I've come across on this site. It's honestly difficult to read anything else in comparison. Getting to read more really brightens my day. Please keep 'em coming!

Chapter 109: I died a little inside. That was a tormenting read (in more ways than one)

Chapter 110: Wh-whoaa, hahaha... that-- that was an excellent twist. Major props. Faith's poor baby's gonna come out emaciated though. I'm excited to see how this will play out :) And happy that the amount of time Toni took to reach her exceeded my expectations (One chapter :P) Very well done!

I laughed at this part:
"Faith may be quite wild when you find her."
"That will not be anything new."

GOSH...She's pregnant...Some part of me really hopes that Troy has nothing to do with it, but a small part of me thinks that he does considering everything...I just have to wait to see what you have planned...and how Buffy is going to take the news of Faith's pregnancy...Will she still love her if it's Troy's? Update soon please!!!!

I really love this story and I am not sure when I have ever felt so conflicted over the romance between characters.I find myself yearning for Toni and Buffy to get back together as much as I was doing for Faith and Buffy earlier in the story. I am looking forward to reading how you bring all this together.

I lost track of the story (around 88 on here) and i swear i was sitting around waiting for updates for months before losing track then i happen upon it again here and realized i was sooo far behind now i rush spent days trying to get to the end and know what happens in this epic journey i set myself upon by reading it. it went so far yet slowly towards the chaos that had to come. i get to the end and was like...is that it? COULD that really be it? i craved more a epilogue or 500, wonderful ride that i didn't think would end so "soon".

i hate you.

This is probably the greatest piece of AFF I have ever read. I can't wait for the next update!

I am sickened by Buffy's behavior. make up your damn mind, woman. How can you be thinking of having sex with Toni, when Faith is 'rotting' in hell!? Seriously, SICKENED!!! ... can't wait for the next chapter. You rock, Bkitty!

Bkitty, you are bringin' me down.

Also, not gonna lie-- I can't stop thinking about Buffy and Toni having sex either.

Anyways, what else is there to say without sounding like a broken record? Totally intense, dramatic, emotional, awesome chapter. You're queen of the world, ok? Your words give people instant orgasms. You're the best and I don't even bother reading any other fanfics anymore 'cause they just pale in comparison to yours.

Have a nice day :-D