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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realy love the idea behind this story. Cant wait to see what else you do with the magic thing.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. The plot is diffrent, and the characterization is vivid. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww how sweet how Angelus and Spike are taking care of Xander. You know you don't often see a soft side of Angelus in slash (at least not from the start) but this is deffinitly a creative start! Good job! I can't wait for the next installment!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is really good so far i like how you change spike and angelus charicters some keep going
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write next chapter NOW!!!!!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good, I really like it, but you are writting in the wrong tense. Thoughts can be in present tense, but actions in a story are supposed to be in past tense.