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for Follow Through

by MistressTitania

person wizardvamp
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm....the plot thickens. I'm not sure I entirely agree with you making Dumbledore one of the 'bad' guys, but hey its your story and you do what you want! Hehehehehehehe...but great job so far. Btw can you please explain what an OOC is, that kind of confused me a little bit! Great job!
person blacknightwolf04
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. i like that u have wes in here. he might be ooc but thats alright. i think he is fine the way he is. i hope you might focus a lil on wes in coming chapters. maybe a friendship with him and xander. but i really think Wes fits into this really well. lol i love the story and i can't wait for more, so keep writin!
person belinda
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very beautiful story. I love Xander and want to see him happy
thank you for seeing that he and Harry are happy. I cried all the way to
the end. P.S. Please hurt Dumbledore BADLY!!!!! Disgusting Turd.

Thank you
Belinda
person Kitsune Morgan
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Most of the time when I read stories that are crossed over with Harry Potter they seem to be lacking the story base for one or the other. This one you do a good job of blending the two. I read the first part and what Xanders dad I wanted to hurt the damn man. When I read more I cheered and was glad to see that Drew went byebye. I hope to read more soon
person Carmella
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, can you please go on? I do so enjoy this stroy
person Shinigami24
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I want a list of reasons why you hate Dumbledore. I'm not too fond of Dumbledore after the 5th book. I want to know your reasons, so I can see if they're the same reasons as mine. By the way, what prophecy did Spike find? And is Giles and Hermione in this? If so, pls don't bash them! Same goes for Neville, Luna and Tonks! They are 3 of my top fav characters! As for why he didn't train Xanders, either he buried Ripper too deep, or Willow had something to do with it!
person shavin
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know if there's one thing I've noticed often in most slash stories that involve Xander/Spike, Angel(us)/Xander, Spike/Angel(us) and Xander/Angel(us)/Spike that Buffy always seems to be a bitch and I've always wondered why that is? Hmmmm.... anyways great story thus far I'm really eager to see what the next installment is going to be like! Are we going to have a little M/M or even M/M/M next time? Just wondering!
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write the next chapter soon i love this story
person blacknightwolf04
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story you have to update soon!!!!!
person Bella_Morta
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Follow Through is very good so far and u should countine this piece for the enjoyment of others like my self.