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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read all five chapters and they were awesome! I'm a big Buffy/Faith shipper so natuarally I loved this story. It well written and you got the characters down good. I cant wait to see where you go with this. Even though they're together and happy, I have a feeling this will not end well. I hope you update soon cuz I really want to know what happens.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!
i hope youll do something about faith so that she doesnt become too evil, but i hope it wont come between the 2 of them, they so great together!!!
i hope youll do something about faith so that she doesnt become too evil, but i hope it wont come between the 2 of them, they so great together!!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story. update soon.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh how can something be good and painful at the same time?
You're really putting us in the situation here. There are some serious moral
questions being asked. Love vs Right. How much can you forgive for love and in the end...of course
is it enough? /sigh. In the end you gotta ask if (forgive me for quoting this, i blame my mother
and her TV1 marathons) 'the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one'.
Buffy is a rather moral type character and this is taking us back to the Angel days where she plunged a sword through his chest.
If Faith doesnt shed her attachment to the Mayor then I'm not forseeing much happiness for anyone.
I liked the quick (yet lame) cover from Buffy and the resulting conversation and letter- very in character and very easy to imagine.
Characterisation is pretty damn good. Willow would see through that and pursue it and an issue like this would end up ripping
Buffy appart, especially since she had been through it once before. It'd be a toss up between- "i can't do it this time" and "I'll do it but never
be the same afterwards". Okay way too much from me. One day I promise to just leave a "great work, keep going" - until then though,
keep it comin' :)
You're really putting us in the situation here. There are some serious moral
questions being asked. Love vs Right. How much can you forgive for love and in the end...of course
is it enough? /sigh. In the end you gotta ask if (forgive me for quoting this, i blame my mother
and her TV1 marathons) 'the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one'.
Buffy is a rather moral type character and this is taking us back to the Angel days where she plunged a sword through his chest.
If Faith doesnt shed her attachment to the Mayor then I'm not forseeing much happiness for anyone.
I liked the quick (yet lame) cover from Buffy and the resulting conversation and letter- very in character and very easy to imagine.
Characterisation is pretty damn good. Willow would see through that and pursue it and an issue like this would end up ripping
Buffy appart, especially since she had been through it once before. It'd be a toss up between- "i can't do it this time" and "I'll do it but never
be the same afterwards". Okay way too much from me. One day I promise to just leave a "great work, keep going" - until then though,
keep it comin' :)
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, sorry i made you upset, fox. and i like the long reviews. don't stop! pretty please...
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
super hot!!!! XD
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long Buffy's gonna put up with Faith working for the other side. My guess is that next chapter something really bad is gonna happen and either Buffy or Faith are just going to snap. Anyways, that was a great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this fic. The storyline is original and I'm clueless to how this will end. It's hot, sweet, angsty and funny all at the same time. Great update and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated!!!
great chapter btw
lovin the love
yes love is enough to get through it all.
do carry on you got me hooked
update soon
great chapter btw
lovin the love
yes love is enough to get through it all.
do carry on you got me hooked
update soon
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this is what I'm talking! Love conquers all. And I'm not just talking with pretty flowers and soft kisses either!
I'm really hoping that Buffy can be more of a hero in this one (so to speak). Lets face it, in 'Make me forget'
she isn't exactly the kind of character you'd look up to. It'd be nice to see her stick by her convictions, even when things
start getting rough. In the end that was what made her who she was.
I've loved the last three chapters (a romantic's dream) and now i know its time to buckle down
and put my hard hat on. It'll be interesting to see how things go considering it looks as though Faith is staying where she is.
Pleanty to play with here Niki and im looking very much forward to seeing where you take us from here. The humour is working
good too (better than) and it lightens up the peice nicely. Keep it comin'
I'm really hoping that Buffy can be more of a hero in this one (so to speak). Lets face it, in 'Make me forget'
she isn't exactly the kind of character you'd look up to. It'd be nice to see her stick by her convictions, even when things
start getting rough. In the end that was what made her who she was.
I've loved the last three chapters (a romantic's dream) and now i know its time to buckle down
and put my hard hat on. It'll be interesting to see how things go considering it looks as though Faith is staying where she is.
Pleanty to play with here Niki and im looking very much forward to seeing where you take us from here. The humour is working
good too (better than) and it lightens up the peice nicely. Keep it comin'