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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
buffys a bitch!!! but hurry up and update some more :D
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!!! I love this story!!! I especially love the humour in Faith's P.O.V., her thoughts are just so funny! Need more!!!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you weren't kiddin with the angst. how could buffy do that? who in the hell does she think she is? grr...phew..anyways...hot update. oh dear..don't make faith do anythin stupid...please. lol. the whole ending--screw it the whole thing has me speechless. wow! update soon please!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay first of all, what is Willow's problem? The two people she brutally murdered on purpose were just appetizers before the main course : destroying the world. She really needs to chill and go screw her own slayer and let Buffy have Faith. Secondly, I feel sorry for Wood because he got totally used. Let's hope he stays mad and gone(crosses finger and toes). Third thing, what's up with the search party? How could they not know where Buffy was? Faith and Buffy very loudly screwed each other's brains out, all night, repeatedly. Angel and Kennedy both have super hearing, how could they miss that? How could normal people miss that? I mean if Faith could her Kennedy and Willow screwing, then surely Kennedy could hear Buffy and Faith. The hotel is big but it's not THAT big!
Don't get me wrong. Everything else was great, and the sex! WOW!!! HOT HOT HOT!!! It's just the whole 'where's Buffy story line' was a little tough to swallow for reasons I stated.
Fourth thing, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with Cordelia. That will be one helluva story in and of itself. Lastly, please give Buffy a clue. Why is she trying to please Willow! Willow, the "I killed 2 people, tried to the destroy the world and eat more pussy than the law allows" is hardly in a position to judge anybody, EVER. So give Buffy a clue, don't let Faith go off the deep end and have Willow take a chill pill. Some hot makeup sex between Buffy and Faith would be good. I'm seeing Buffy grovelling at Faith altar for several hours. Faith deserves more than a few good orgasms but grovelling + giving great head is always a good start. :)
Don't get me wrong. Everything else was great, and the sex! WOW!!! HOT HOT HOT!!! It's just the whole 'where's Buffy story line' was a little tough to swallow for reasons I stated.
Fourth thing, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with Cordelia. That will be one helluva story in and of itself. Lastly, please give Buffy a clue. Why is she trying to please Willow! Willow, the "I killed 2 people, tried to the destroy the world and eat more pussy than the law allows" is hardly in a position to judge anybody, EVER. So give Buffy a clue, don't let Faith go off the deep end and have Willow take a chill pill. Some hot makeup sex between Buffy and Faith would be good. I'm seeing Buffy grovelling at Faith altar for several hours. Faith deserves more than a few good orgasms but grovelling + giving great head is always a good start. :)
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's me again. Just wanted to encourage to keep writing. You're doing a great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! I felt you deserve more than 15 reviews so I figured I'd toss a couple your way. Actually this is really just a shameless ploy to get you to write chapter 7. :) I hope it works! :)
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. Some definite angst going on there.
Willow needs here arse whooped since she's very much in the same bed as Faith. Can you say overreaction? Serious issues.
Considering it was she who bought Faith to the Dale....I wont get in the way of a great story (and it is) but a reason to why she is suddenly going all "grr" when previously she was fine would be great. I tend to think that those two forgave and got over in the last epps. In earlier seasons (before the flaying) this would have been fine but now...the characters have grown quite a bit so a bit of clarification would be good.
As for Buffy...hmmm wake up and smell the roses and stop carring about what everyone else thinks. Who in their right mind would turn down Faith?This particular insecurity is VERY unattractive. And although she has to (*strong nudge*) i'd require some serious groveling to take her back...or maybe a breakdown rofl. Although im still upset with Dawn for kicking her sis out of the house im very happy she was in Faith's corner (her sister's corner)...blood should be thicker than water...at least with these two...
Also i do have to agree with omi about the "where's buffy" thing. There was some serious screaming going on there so it would have been a little hard not to see where she was?or who she was with?or how many times rofl.
Im interested to see what you do with Queen C- could be some great stuff coming from there. She?s a great character just don?t forget what she recently went through.
Overall, very hot (scorching), very good (never a doubt) and very well written (as always). And as it should be i am prepared to be your (obviously opinionated-appologies) slave as long as you keep updating (preferably very fast?I need my fix!) :).
Keep up the great work!
Willow needs here arse whooped since she's very much in the same bed as Faith. Can you say overreaction? Serious issues.
Considering it was she who bought Faith to the Dale....I wont get in the way of a great story (and it is) but a reason to why she is suddenly going all "grr" when previously she was fine would be great. I tend to think that those two forgave and got over in the last epps. In earlier seasons (before the flaying) this would have been fine but now...the characters have grown quite a bit so a bit of clarification would be good.
As for Buffy...hmmm wake up and smell the roses and stop carring about what everyone else thinks. Who in their right mind would turn down Faith?This particular insecurity is VERY unattractive. And although she has to (*strong nudge*) i'd require some serious groveling to take her back...or maybe a breakdown rofl. Although im still upset with Dawn for kicking her sis out of the house im very happy she was in Faith's corner (her sister's corner)...blood should be thicker than water...at least with these two...
Also i do have to agree with omi about the "where's buffy" thing. There was some serious screaming going on there so it would have been a little hard not to see where she was?or who she was with?or how many times rofl.
Im interested to see what you do with Queen C- could be some great stuff coming from there. She?s a great character just don?t forget what she recently went through.
Overall, very hot (scorching), very good (never a doubt) and very well written (as always). And as it should be i am prepared to be your (obviously opinionated-appologies) slave as long as you keep updating (preferably very fast?I need my fix!) :).
Keep up the great work!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O oooo LOVE it! PLEASE write more. And that was really hot. Very well written too, you're characters are very in-character (lol, couldnt think of a better way to describe it) Didi I mention it was hot? yay, buffy hates robin, and HOPEFULLY faith dumps his ass. I never liked him anyways, dont know why though. Oh wait, I do. FUFFY! (im hyper, go figure ^^ )
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a great chapter, about time they got to it, can't wait till they tell the others that their now together, oh and love how evil angel was being.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'I?m so happy I could vomit'? Rofl I'm very gald she didnt!
Yet again another awesom chapter Niki, this stoy is heading in a great direction so far!
Keep up the excellent work and keep feeding the voracious beast otherwise known as 'your readers/fans' ;D.
Yet again another awesom chapter Niki, this stoy is heading in a great direction so far!
Keep up the excellent work and keep feeding the voracious beast otherwise known as 'your readers/fans' ;D.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot damn that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooood. i give you 10 out of 10.