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for Make Me Forget

by nik1styles

person Just Me
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, really need another one, i really want to know what is going on at the end, very curious about it, please update soon.
person cristina
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, nice turn. I bet Xan man is craping his pants!
Can't wait for more!!!! ;):)
person K@y
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...all I can say is ''W.T.F. mate..." XD
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please more its a great fic
person AR
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story please continue writing! Hope you up date soon
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn! great new chapter! poor faith, i just wanna take her in my arms and confort her!
please update soon!
person Fox_Feather
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow girl, i do believe things have just gotten super interesting.
I gotta say this is a turn i was not expecting and im ectatic at the direction you are taking this story.
Poor Xander having all that dredged up in front of the others and Faith.... :( I forsee lots of weirdness and Buffy and Faith hugs rofl (being hopeful again).
One thing i do find escpecially hmmmish is the way Cordy was looking at Wes...in all the freakiness (Angel, Consequences, Cordy) this is perhaps something small but still...hmm..
The eyes going yellow thing...1st slayer joining spell? Or am i tottally looking into stuff? Oh well.
On a side note, thanks muchly for responding to my last reveiw, i wasnt expecting it and am greatful for it. :D.
As always Niki, a fantastic new chapter and the cliffhanger is gonna leave me at the point of near tears until you update again sooooooo UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
person omnikool
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay Cordelia is really freaking me out with the no touching rule. Can somebody say 'The First' with its noncorporeal "don't touch me" self. Although, Fred gave her glass of water so I suppose she is corporeal enough. I do think she stills housing a demon or two. Why didn't they make her sing so Lorne could do his no demon check. That's gonna come back to bite them. The scene with Buffy and Faith re-enacting the Faith - Xander confrontation was intriguing. Having Faith play Xander's part was great. I know Faith is remorseful but feeling first hand how helpless and terrified Xander must have felt has to add a whole new dimension to her regret. I can't wait for you to explain that! Also, I'm thinking that whatever made Angel black out also possessed Buffy and Faith. Please update soon and explain all the weirdness. BTW ... Now the Conner (who I never could stand) has stormed off in a huff lets hope and pray he stays mad (and gone). Maybe him and Wood can go to the east coast and kill evil things together and never darken the west coast again. I know it's a lot to hope for but I'm keeping fingers crossed. :) Update! UPdate UPDATE SOON!!!! :)
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! i cant believe buffy did that!!!
you have to update soon! poor faith!!!
person phoenixJay27
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch harsh blow.
not liking buffy being a chicken shit.
very good fic you'vew got here.
keep up the good work.
quality stuff here