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for Make Me Forget

by nik1styles

person Anon
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn! just when i thought it couldnt get better!!
i loved this chapter! and i loved that buffy got through faith at the end!
i just cant wait for whats gonna happen next.
please,please update soon!
person Ehlayah
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phenominal,Awsome. I havent read such a good fan fic in a while!I really like the storyline too and let me say you have faith's personality down to a art. All though she'd never really show any emotions.But again its great.I cant wait to read the rest.
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry oracle, it took me a minute to get to answering this. i have a few reasons for making willow so harsh in this story. mainly, i needed an antagonist. someone really dead set against the idea of buffy and faith together. buffy was afraid of how her friends would react to their relationship, so i needed someone close to her to make that fear a reality. willow fits into that role perfectly for me. she has a tendency to be jealous and narrow-minded in some aspects a lot of the time, and i personally don't think her character has shown a ton of growth in this area over the years. also, she was upset about faith and buffy having any type of relationship from the very beginning. honestly, i just asked myself if i could see this really happening... willow getting an attitude like this. then i reminded myself of the fight in the Yoko Factor or when she threatened giles. she can totally work herself up into something. lastly, it gives me warm fuzzies when someone finally comes around... i've already been making willow a little more understanding in this last chapter, so you might see her become more accepting of faith.
person Jesse
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. please keep it going. update soon
person Wicked_Punk-Angel
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Looking forward to more.
person redjayzee
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story. i kinda like it when buffy and faith fight (i like it even more when they get with the smoochies) anyway loving it, lovin it lovin in. Please update soon. By the way did i tell you i am lovin it?
person Fox_Feather
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...now THAT was a cliffhanger! Bloody awesom Niki.
I really liked Lilah and wasn't exactly happy over her pre-mature demise but im guessing that in this fic
im not gonna be keyed up to feeling the warm fuzzies for her. This is all starting to come together quite
nicely. Ding! We have a clue, ladies and gentlemen!
Forget my last reveiw, the romantic has re-awoken, kicking and screaming and im hoping Buffy does a white Knight act. Rofl.
C'mon Niki, you know you wanna give me my happy ending!
Poor Wes, maybe this time around he can get some closure...and Faith...*whimper*...
Okay i think that about covers it. Damned good! Feeeeeeeeeeed the fan! Update! Update!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
words can't describe how much i love this story. I hope Buffy can find Faith before she does anything stupid.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is fucking amazing. I love it! The character interaction, the unique plot, everything, it's perfect. I can't wait to read more! I love the way you're showing all sides of the issue. Willow's pretty harsh in this one though. Any special reason you chose to write it that way? As a fellow writer, I'm just curious is all. I eagerly await your next update.

Blessed Be,
Sarah
person cristina
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Why you! lol. Great update!!!!!! I am glad I got to read something great today :)
You are doing so freaking good with this fic and I totaly can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!