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for Make Me Forget

by nik1styles

person wac
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there going to be another chapter? coz i would love for you not to kill Faith! anyway...love the fic! please continue!
person lajolie
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can only say: you kick ass!! But i;m gonna kick yours if you don;t offer us the final chapter very soon!
person kay
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!!!!!! well bout time u updated this! i like the chapt, very action packed. cant wait tillnext chapt!!
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok that is so not the end of this story because it just can't be. update soon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey look at this! See i knew all that harrassing would pay off! This chap was fuckin perfection girl, seriously. The pacing was solid, even though you've managed to use every damn character from both Buffy and Angel. and that is SO hard to do! bravo honey. This part was all about the action adn you wrote it all without making it seem like it was just a listing of events. It totally flowed.

And of Fuckin LORD! The ending? that bit of cliffhanger?! lovely. This fic is acutally so nicely put together I dont think I would mind if Faith died! But then might be kind of weird, since we've been all in her POV for most of it. But hell you could make it work. I love a good tragedy. Then, I like a hot little happy ending too.

But anyways I want more! will nagging you endlessly get it? Yeah? ok I'll get right on that. heh

-poet
person phoenixJay27
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally some progress here.
it was kind of at a plateu for awhile
do update soon its getting good.
do we get another smut scene?
person Fox_Feather
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And finally our beloved hero grows a pair again! Woot!
?I?m done saying I?m sorry. I?m done begging. I?m stopping you now! Your choice is gone. I?m NOT letting you do this!?
It's about time and I'm glad to see her back on the same page as the rest of us! Now she can scoop Faith up in her arms,
take her home, tell the scoobs whats what and they can all go for tea....okay well maybe not but still.../grin.
Nice little tie up of loose ends there Niki, with the Lilah/WR&H spell :) Couding of judgement was a good idea, explained a few of the kinks.
I'm liking the truth spell too...and the weight question... /snicker.
I wonder if Wes is gonna be having a little fun with it now that he has dragged her off to a secluded room ;).
With the prophecy i sence a lot more coming and that's just fine by me :)).
Update soon and keep it comin', loving it as always :).


person beck
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! more Fanficky goodness please
person Wicked_Punk-Angel
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that was so intense! My eyes were practically glued to the screen towards the ending. Finally Buffy is able to come to terms with her love for Faith! Better late than never. The ending of the chap. was really sweet in its own way. Looking forward to an update soon.
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, gotta say I'm really loving this fic. The interaction, the characters, the plot, it's fucking great! Having Faith go through all that, and then the Soobs finally see it's Lilah, wow, I did not see that one coming. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your next update, hopefullly soon!

Blessed Be,
Sarah