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by Whisper

person Whisper
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews, guys! I'm sorry for any depression my story has caused ;), but don't worry this story will have a Spuffy ending. This is my first fiction or story I've ever written, so please let me know of any plot holes or mistakes I may have made. Thanks again guys!
person meagan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how Buffy can have her cake and eat it too. She tells Spike she loves him but won't be with him so she doesn't hurt Sean's feelings. It seems she's real sensative to others but when it comes to Spike, she can do whatever she likes. What I do like about this story is that Spike is not solely to blame for them not being in contact with each other sooner if Buffy has known from the beginning, so she can't hold him against that. I hope when they do get together that Spike will not just keel over and fall into bed with her right away, let her stew for a bit. Or better yet, Spike becomes human and keeps it from Buffy. I am liking how this is playing out so far, keep it up!
person pgavigan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations, it takes a lot to make me dislike Buffy more than the last two seasons of BTVS and the last season of Angel caused me to do so, but this story has done it. By having her know of his return, and presumably the 'goodness' of the Angel crew when running Wolfram and Hart, she is now at least partially responsible for the deaths of Fred and Wesley, the maiming of Spike by Dana the Bone Saw Vampire Slayer and his near damnation to Hell, and must surely have been involved in the humiliation of her vampire paramours (I refuse to allow them the qualification of 'lovers' in this story) during The Girl In Question.

Yet you still allow her to take the self righteous avenue in trying to force some form of understanding between her and Spike regarding her new lover.

I hope Sean realizes what he's letting himself in for.

This is the Slayer at her worse, yet you seem to imply that this will somehow be a Spuffy. God, why would you inflict her upon him?
person MarzBar
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual, Buffy is a blockhead. I'd like somebody to write Spike in love with someone who appreciates him and is not worried about what other people think. How did anybody ever think Buffy could have a "normal" life? Anyway, you keep writing this, I'll keep reading.
person MarzBar
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good start. More soon please.
person Monkey
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm Loving it!! Great detail on the demons and their deaths!! Keep it coming.

Poor Charles.