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good story, please update soon

I like how you took the time and effort to really describe the new den. It gives me a feel for the place so im not totally lost. Its kinda weird how Xander calls Spike darling though. OMG I love the ?orgy that is not an orgy? in ch3. it?s like a pile of puppies! Aaaawwwwwww! Update sooooon! Xander and Spike still have to ?comfort? Andrew? make it pervy? ♥Pweez♥

Very nice and i want more plz? xander as the alpha and spike as alpha-beta....and andrew as beta? wow never would have thought of that mix. :)

this story is so good, even if its sad. i hope ya add more soon i want to know what happens. And just a side note i hope that little b***h of a father dies very painfully. hope to see the next chapter soon, bye.

i love this story! i can't wait until you update again!

I really love your story. They way you protray the characters is really awesome. I coudn't stop reading it. I really hope you update soon. Just one question, what are you going to do with Angel?

Hey! Haven't you gotten any rewievs? You should be swamped with encouragement on this fic. I just found it and it's cool. I know it's been a while since you updated and perhaps thats beacuse of the unforgivable lack of response you've received.But I want more! Let's make a deal! You update n I rewiev! Okay? I've got some advice for ya. Bring out the personalites of the pack members! Give them integrity! Perhaps a patrol to show off skills... Andrew and Xander could surprise Spike. And you do know that I expect something to happen for Andrew to get pregnant. He wants it. Xander must claim his mates soon. You see, I've got suggestions for plots and there's more but you have to ask for it...........Hope to see more

Hey from new author to new author great story. Just a couple of suggestions. Angel should side with the boys. And the big bad could be the initiative it would be interesting. Some scenes are a little rushed, try and flesh it out some more as well when the three boys get together maybe Andrews a bit apprehensive due to past experience. Keep writing

Interesting ideas. The story line is a little rushed. As complex as your concept is it would be better to take a little more time and share information as part of conversations, etc.

I would like to know more about the elf types. It has been awhile since you updated this. Are you planning to continue?

I love this story. Are you going to update it anymore? Please e-mail me if you do.