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I don't like this chapter.
Cordy thinks she's so much better, even though she's not.
Not really going to say anything about anyone else, just finish this fight already.

Totally excellent as usual. Listen,you can't please everyone all the time,and if you listen to a bunch of suggestions,pretty soon you'll no longer be writing your own story. The tremendous response you've already received should tell you that there are plenty of readers who love YOUR story. Stick to your own vision,it's simply brilliant. Just trust in that and let it rip.

Hey!

i'm on chapter 5 & i REALLY like your story!! B & F having a little girl.. Who could think of that!! a REALLY good idea!! Keep doing this!!

~R.

Great story! But um... The scoobies are being a little hard on the three of them daon't you think? Anyway... please update soon!

This is the perfect mix between drama and lightheartedness that so isnt a word. You can't always have everything go well and be happy and sappy and shit. Chapter 19 really made the story more interesting not that it wasnt before but now even more so. Hope you post tomorrow so I can read while I am sitting at work for 19hrs. You are the best. Kisses. PS clowns are fuckin scary.

Damn. You have made me into a this-fic-aholic. I LOVE IT!!! Update soooooooon! I don't care if your fingers fall off! I'm addicted! Katie becomes cranky without updated chapters! Please? *puppy dog eyes*

Work?! You mean work work?!!! Um,would you like me to speak to your boss,because clearly these updates are extremely important and...The real world,you say? You must earn a living? Well shit. We're all going to suffer,aren't we?

Awsome. Good hard hitting. However ever the drama. I know I'm not all happy endings and fluffy bunnies either, but a little light relief? Even Othello had the clowns.

Wow!!! That was great! Angel and Faith are not guilt free but Buffy still take the prize in the 'I'm a self centered self absorbed the world revolves around me' category. I Actually I blame Buffy for everything because if she would grow a brain for 2 seconds Faith and Angel wouldn't be going nuts trying to please her. Again I think Buffy, this Buffy anyway is worse person either of them could ever fall in love with. Maybe the prospect of losing you flesh blood will make the 3 grow up and get over it. Actually I blame Angel too. He's been around for centuries and he still acts like a f#$%ing idiot. At least Buffy and Faith can use their youth as a partial excuse. What's Angel excuse? I've been an idiot for close to 3 centuries why stop now?

I can't wait to see what the 3 of them do to fix the mess. Please update soon!!! Great job so far!!! Keep going!

The chapters I've read since my last review have all been excellent as usual. I hope Faith and Buffy finally decide to communicate and trust each other. It'd be great to have Faith tell Buffy about her past and Buffy tell Faith about how miserable she was without her. You've captured each character's voice so well and in fact I actually prefer the Cordelia in your fic to the one on the show. Eagerly looking forward to the next update.