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for This little girl

by Buffygirl

person cho
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny chapter. =)
Keep'em coming.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there's no shame in being dramatic, I'll bet it helps you immensely with your writing. Seriously though, just look at the feedback you've received. It's incredible. I know there have been many great things in your story,but I just absolutely love the opening lines. The image is really vivid,and I was hooked just like that. It's so cute and sweet to picture Buffy as a mom trying to deal with this adorable little handful. That opening scene is just brilliant,and I can't say enough about how fun it's been to read along. I repeat myself again,please don't make us wait so long for new chapters,follow your story,and "Yea,you're back!"
person phoenixjay27
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh really cute.
good pice of work you got.
the earlier arguements seemed to drag a bit
but a brilliant piece of work you've got here.
keep up the good writing
person sheila
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh honey where are you? I miss reading your story so much. I can't believe people are soo mean(Actually I can because I know there are cruel people out there). I hope you write something sooner or just give us an author's note saying you are ok. I'm kinda starting to worry about you. *smiles* you are a very gifted writer. *hugs* you are wonderful
person Jillbone
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank God you're back. I love this story so much. I think if I weren't already married I'd ask you in a heartbeat. Keep up the good work.
person Katie K
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whines* come on, what are you trying to do to me? I'm SUFFERING here! PLEASE please PLEASE update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello? Are you trying to torture all of us? Update already,will ya?
person Katie K
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE ON THIS STORY! DON'T U REALIZE I AM SUFFERING SEVERE WITHDRAWAL SYMPTOMS?!?!?! Which include coming on here every spare second to see if you've updated... I have a problem. *sob* just update!!!
person callie
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovin what ur doin,,,keep it up! I know its only been like a few days since u updated ,,but it feels like weeks!!!
will bribery help w the writting? cause ive got cookies..,(grin)
person toria
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well apart from all the seriousness of the story i found it quite enjoyable. update soon please.