rate_review Reviews

Oh my God one of the best Faith/Buffy story i had ever read, I couldnt stop reading, not even for a second until I had finish...plz plz keep going i love it, you are a great writer and is really a great story, plz update it

WOW!! *pleasantly surprised* THIS is VERY, VERY GOOD! You got me hooked already and I'll be waiting like a headless *chuckles* chicken for you next update.

WOW! Powerful fanfic.. Way to go!

I love it all...keep doing what you doing. Plz..:)

I was very impressed with this story. I don't usually like original characters in fanfics, because I feel they take away from the plotline and the story of the main characters who we love and hate - but I thought yours added well to the story. I really enjoyed reading the story, and it was interesting how you used flashbacks to show what their history had been. I liked how everything was drawn out. The only complaint I've got is there were some grammatical errors in a couple places, there instead of their, and other similar mistakes (but that's just the stickler in me for grammatical accuracy - the trials of being an editor). But other than that, very well done.

And now for the important part - I want more! More, more, more! Please? Pretty please? Soon?

well what could i say your story is really, really, really good!!! hope you'll be able to finish the whole story soon coz i can't wait to find out how this story ends.

u should update soon im curious about what happens next.

Sorry, but I really have to stop reading this. While you obviously seem to be a decent writer you made a big mistake, at least in my eyes. The plot had lots of potential but your Cordelia is just too mary suish. In the first 5 or 6 chapters her character was amusing, but that turned quickly into boring and from that point on to outright annoying. You obviously seem to like her character a lot and there's nothing bad about that. But it seemed to me as if your intention for the story had been different, at least at the beginning. I think that character ruined a perfectly good plot.

Come back soon, this is a great story and I miss it

All I gotta say is that this story is far more one of the best fics I've read in a while and it's such a flow read that I've read it twice and it still keeps me on my toes so yea.... please update asap cuz this is the best and your the best at it ha ha keep it up!
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I statred this awhile back and got totally hooked! This is a great thought and story line.....please do more!