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by Buffygirl

person Renee (again)
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forget one thing. UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
person Faith
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck that was hot. It was so well written and um did I mention that it was fuckin hot. There are so many great moments in this. By far my favorite is that Faith has taken to motherhood. That porn star comment was priceless. Can't wait to read more. You're the best!!
person chell
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that last ch was Hot. Great job!!1
person jude
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story. The chapters can't come quick enough. Nice to get a bit of action though, get the weekend off on the right foot. Only in 10 Mins i'm gong for dinner with my partners parents......i'll be distracted the whole time...aaargh!
person Katie K
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gets down on knees and declares undying love for you and this story*
person omnikool
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I love this story. I like how you show the softer side of Cordelia but she's still Queen C. Even the series tended to make Cordelia's character very shallow so I'm glad you have given her character some depth. I like that Buffy and Faith both had girlfriends that they totally forgot about when they're around each other. They can't keep their hands off of each other whenever they get within 2 feet. I also like that you're not afraid to show Buffy as a selfish, narcissitc, self absorded b#$%h. Actually, Buffy is the worst person Faith could possible fall for. Faith needs someone that will build her up and love her unconditionally. Buffy is used to the world revolving around her so she is ill equiped to provide Faith or anyone else for that matter with the type of love and support needed to sustain a relationship. I'm not saying that Buffy doesn't love people. I'm just saying that she loves herself A LOT and everyone else is a distant second. ;)

BTW ... I am totally digging the rapid fire updates. YOU ROCK!!!
person kai
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool update but what's up with buffy. thought she would be happy. can't wait for the next update...............
person Faith
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Baby, that chapter had so much drama in it, I loved it. I know you are busy and I will be on the phone with you tonight so you be even more busy so don't worry about that other chapter. The story is going really great and I can't wait for what happens next. Id be just as jealous as Faith.
person greens
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buffy is just overwhelmed & not having an affair w/ Angel. I hope that Faith doesn't jump to conclusions again & take off w/ Annie. Great job-as always!!!
person Renee
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is turning out great. And baby Annie is soooo cute. I have to know what the hell is bothering Buffy????? Update plzzzzzzzz!!!