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Pls don't have Willow be the ONE who stuck Spike with a soul! Same goes for Tara and Giles! Since they are the only ones i know who have the magic ability to do that! Well and Ethan, but last I checked Ethan never met Spike, much less know him! Pls pair Giles and Ethan up! Giles needs to loosen up badly! And having Ethan in his life, means he might stand up to Buffy! He needs to tell Buffy NO!

As I said earlier, I am REALLY enjoying this story. And I'm suddenly seeing the sense of S/X/Sev. :D

The charcters are nicely developed, the idea is original, and I can hardly wait to see where you go with this.

That said... in my own writing, I tend to abuse the ellipses (meaning the ...s) and I've noticed that in recent chapters you seem to be doing the same with commas.

This is NOT a flame. Not at all. It's just... a heads-up, as it were. :)

This really IS a great fic and Ihope to see more of it VERY soon! *hugs*

~Tis

Write More! Write More! Write More! PLEASE! :)

Bella Morta

awesome story. update soon!

Thanks for letting me know where your story was, but I'm not really into character bashing(sorry). Judging from the reviews, and the number of hits you got, you have a lot of fans. I'd still like to read the Riley fic if you don't lose interest in it. Good luck with all your stories. :)

Marie_Jayn

Buffy ans anya BITCHS!!!!!!!!!

Hi, I just lovvvvvvve your story. It's about time that Harry and Draco and Snape gets a new chance at a life. I know that this is your story and I am not trying to tell you how to do it, but how about have a three way with Xander, Spike and Snape. That way Spike and Snape can keep Buffy and Anya away from Xander, and Xander can kick Lupin's butt if he ever comes to the Hellmouth to check-up on Harry. But that is just an idea and if you don't wont to do it that way that is just fine I will still read your story and find it gooooooooood. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KEEP UP THE GOOD CHAPTERS. Bye

i loved it, i'm not sure what else to say aside from i loved it, beautiful ^_^

If you truly want a vote, I'd recommend finding a way to hook Severus up with Angel. *chuckles*

I have a feeling they'd understand each others' angst.

Loving the story so far. Please write and post more soon.

I read the story and it was very imaginative, i thought it could have used a little more action, because i was hoping draco would get eaten by spike. anyway, it was nicely written.