rate_review Reviews

Very good story, I like it. Sorry about your mom. Parents can be odd. I think my mom would have an conniption if she read my stuff, which is mostly violent. Only one tiny complaint- you write that Xander feels hallow. Hallow means sacred or holy. Hollow means empty. Just a wee problem, but please continue when you can.

Oh god you're right.. LMAO. It looked so odd to me when I ran everything through spell check. But I was too preocuppied to actually notice that I used the wrong word.. Opsy.

Oh well. Thank you very much for your comment. It's appreciated