rate_review Reviews

please update?

Love the story, read it all in two sittings (damn work for interrupting!). If you want help with the Angelus story I'd be glad to help, anything to speed a sequel to be honest. I love the story, the plot and the way you write.

M email is d e o 2 3 5 @ e m a i l . v c c s . e d u (minus the spaces of course), feel free to shoot me an email when/if you need/want help.

~Tesgura

This story is amazing! Love the fact that Dru's in it, don't see her all that often. Way to go!

NIIIICE!!! Please write a sequel!!!!!!

Chapter 7 - I think this is horrible!! Xander is sad and unhappy, Angelus is .. well cruel! Drusilla is so very annoying and everything is a huuuuuge mess! I still kinda like it though, I wouldnt be reading it otherwise. <3

Very great story, I love reading it alot. I can't review every chapter, not good at english. :(
But want you to know that I'm one of so many people that read and love your story!!! (^_^)
Thanks for your great writing.

This is really good! I don't see nearly enough Xangel fics out there.

Hi! ^^

A very nice story! I love the bad guys very much. They are so much more fun, then Buffy and her team of goodies!!!!
Most I like Dru! She is such a sweet, crazy person. How she cares for her family and shows no mercy for everybody else. A real Dark Princess!^.~

And I love Angelus. He is not as depressing as his brooding souled version.

Yes ... I really like this FF!!
I find it kind of difficult to find good Buffy-slash-storys. Even here is just so little of that stuff, so I glat I found your FF.

hugs

~Mamo

I liked this chapter, really I did. But I think it was rushed at the end and there definitely needs to be an Epilogue. Otherwise it's just a kinda funky ending. It was a bit anticlimactic, to tell the truth, the battle that is. I needed more detail, and then an actual ending. Please don't take this as a flame, because for me personally you story is like the best on AFF, I really love it. I just need an Epilogue or something like that. And hey you may have been planning on doing one anyway so this little "review" would have been basically pointless.
Laters~

ch 24 - thanks so much for the email update. One of the things I really like at a couple of other sites is getting emails regarding updates from their tracking feature. I know you have to do this manually and therefore appreciate the effort all the more.

Your note said the story was coming to a close, and while the pacing does seem to be at an appropriate place for a close I will be very sorry to see it happen.

This is a wonderful story, both the ideas and the presentation.