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for Semper Fidelis

by potmunkey

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Just re-reading this chap. in preperation for reading the last one and I may have said this before, but I have to say it again. I love this little exchange. It made me laugh out loud the first time and its just done it again.


?Whoa, hang on there,? she puts up her hands in surrender. ?I told you I didn?t sleep with Cordy.?



?Kennedy.?



?I definitely didn?t sleep with her either.?



?Don?t be a smart ass, I know you gave her that black eye. What the fuck were you thinking??



?That she wouldn?t bruise that easy???


person Bkitty
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last review was mine, I forgot to put my name on it.
person Bkitty
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was by far from crap. I thought it was great. Funny and sad in places. I liked Buffy's response to the elevator music, that was cool. And Faith tackling Buffy out of the way of the taxi, so sweet (and stupid) which just made her line "I shoulda just told you" so cool.

I know this is the end so I won't mention a sequel, lets just all pray for Faith's swift recovery so they can live happily ever after far from our prying eyes.
person Elle
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Believe me, i understand the lack of motivation to write more. Same thing happened to me when i broke up with my ex. But this was a good ending anyways. It worked out perfectly, this wasnt one of those stories that can have a happy ending to it. It was really good, i even managed to let loose a tear at the end. that takes skill, i rarely cry at all, so one tear is a big deal.
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its not that bad!
just like the movie,kinda.
and sorry about yuor relationship.
person ChasingFaith
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm.... Dodgy bastard.....
Love ya work
person kat
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it please update soon
person Melody21
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont let Faith off that easily PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE she's gotts hurt a little more man!!! she deserves it after what she did to buffy! please! its great don't stop can't wait for the next chapter :)
person greens
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I feel bad for Kennedy. This is 1 of my fav fics-u are doing a fab job!!!
person omnikool
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I kinda figured it out. Faith wants Buffy to fight for her. She wants her to be jealous. She wants to know that she belongs to Buffy and no one else. And Buffy, when will she stop being blond and give Faith another chance? I feel sad for Kennedy because loving Buffy has left her with a broken heart and a broken body! When they say love hurts she can more than relate. I think Buffy is afraid to believe that Faith really loves her because it would hurt too much to find out she was lying. Faith has hurt her so many times she just can't risk it again. Maybe Faith begging on her knees will convince Buffy to give her one more chance. Great story. BTW A happy ending is expected and demaned. :)