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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story- touching, well-written, and hot as hell. :) My one complaint? "Y'all" used as a singular. Y'all is "you all" contracted, and is used to address two or more people, or to adress and refer to a group that one person is a part of. (example: "Tell your family I asked about them, and y'all have a happy New Year.") Now, I'm off to read the next story. Delicious!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful again. Off to read the next story. At this rate I'm not going to get anything done.