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for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

by LitGal

person E
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spike can?t be dead! Lirowaus is lying! He has to be... Now will you please, please kill him? I hate to see Xander in so much pain. Please? I?m begging here:)
person Discord
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I hope they find the girls and they aren't too damaged! Spike and Xander are being *so* cute!
person Alice
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was fun, seeing Xander act so differently at this slave show than at the last one. I really enjoyed this, and I'm excited about them maybe finding Tara and Willow. Update soon, please!
person TheShadowCat
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Xander's gotten a bit frisky, hasn't he? Great chapter, please update soon.
person LadyNiteRaven
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excelent chapter. Well written, great length. More please.
person Jasemin
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh.... Xander seems to be the hit at the auction. I just hope that there's no one too interested in him. Loved that new chappy, love the whole story.
Don't end it too soon, I'm lookin' forward to much, much more Spander action... ;-) And btw, did I mention that I'd love that you update so much ?
person Alice
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Spike should take Xander to a sci-fi convention- that should remind Xander of interests. Kidding. This chapter was great, and I love that Spike trained him without hitting him. I kinda hope things won't go exactly right (but in fanfic, they never do) so Xander gets a chance to cuss out and kill Leshar. Bastard. Very good story, and I am hooked. Please continue. I hope things work out for Giles, too.
person Discord
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hums* Lovely story. ^_^
person TheShadowCat
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! An update! Wonderful! Can't wait to see if Angel will try and screw up their chance to rescue the girls.
person E
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope there?ll be more, really soon... I need it:)