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for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

by LitGal

person Discord
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! How could you!!!
person Esfinge
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I've been following your story from the beginning, and I just love it. I haven't reviewd before now, and I'm sorry for that, but I just had to leave you a review to tell you how amazing this story is. I hope you haven't killed Spike, and honestly I don't think you have. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I love that you update so often, thank you so much for that ^_^.
person Alice
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*weeps* Oh my god, please hurry up and update, I can't take this. Its so heartbreaking! Please hurry!
person Alice
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What?!?! OH MY GOD! I'm ready to scream. Please update soon or my brain will explode. Please! Oh god! Please please please please please!!!!
person Amy
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, I suck at reviews, I really do... but "broken" is the best piece of fiction i have rea on aff.net or, for that matter, anywhere.

For every one story I read on this site, there are ten who's reviews assure me I shouldnt bother reading them... and for every piec ei read, there are three i dont bother finishing.

I read your story over and over... all of your works are great but "broken" is fantastic. At night, I refresh the page again and again, hoping for an update.

It's just awesome all around :)
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh, what a cliffhanger, I'm on tenderhooks, good job I know you are likely to update this within a few days cause I really can't wait!!
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok i like the story and all but god damn it can't you just let them be together, my god what else are you going to do to them. please fix it so they are back together ok!!!! i was crying cause of what happened!!! geeze give a guy and his vamp lover a break!
person Discord
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me he's hit rock bottom and is not going to get worse! Lie if you have to.
person nightengale1824
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good grief !!! Are you trying to kill me. I am so tied up in knots right now I won't be able to sleep. Great cliffhanger. Now let's see an update real soon please. I am not opposed to begging or bribing. Don't leave me hanging long.AHHHHHHHHH!! What will I do till you update? Good to see Willow and hear that Tara? is there also. Please don't kill Spike.
person TheShadowCat
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT! You'd better plan on updating soon. I can't take it! AAAAAHHHHHHHH!