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{Insert various screams, whimpers and mutters here}

Chapter 17 - .....no! You can't, not forget Spike! Please tell me that Spike will rip that effin' demon's insides out? Please? Even if it means calling Angel, his sire? Can't let Xander be brain-washed by semen!

Thank you for updating 16 & 17 so swiftly but...ARG! You can't just leave this story there. Granted, great use of characters, very powerful and diverse imagination. But, please, next chapter ASAP!? I'm going to be checking back every 5 minutes until I pass out until it's updated...not good for me! I think I have white hairs...

Okay I am feeling a little better that things will get okay soon. I am so sad for Xander and Spike. Much thanks for a great ride so far.

God, I?ve got tears in my eyes. So sad. I know you tend to update quickly but it really couldn?t happen too soon for me. Can?t wait to see if Spike manage to get out.

Argh, this plot twists like a knife. Poor Xander, he finally feels safe with a worthy master, and some bastard steals it all away, and even worse he has to try and please his new master to keep his true master safe... Spike has gotta be going out of his tree!!

OH NOOOO!!!! *on her kees and begging* Please don?t do this! Keep them save - let Angel, or even Giles rescue them! Please!!!!

:grabs the tissues: You had better update soon.

*Thank God!* Now Spike can escape and save Xander. Silly Xander... Spike luvs him.

OK... do you want to kill me ?!?!
I'm sittin' here, shocked and sad.
Don't leave me like this... please update soo, will ya ?
BTW... love, love, love the story.

Ok, you'd better put the next chapter up very soon or you will be responsible for the mental instability of a certain black cat.

Wow. I was NOT expecting something like this when I clicked the link. The plot is absolutely amazing, the way you characterized Xander and Spike and the rest is just...wow. Fantastic work. I'll definitely be watching for the update of this one!! Great job!

**Zeph**