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for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

by LitGal

person gat
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it, the rescue the explaination everything. very awesome chapter
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit,the ending made me cry almost..

Great fic,hope you write more of this quality soon..
person Alice
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They rescued the girls! And Xander scared Leshar. Very good. Although I would have like to see Willow use the magic and kill some demons, exact some revenge. I vote for an epilogue, where they get to hash through this stuff, get together. Perhaps more kissing?
person nightengale1824
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and great ending but I want more. How about the continuing adventures?? Thanks again for all of the hard work you put into this story. Looking forward to more great work from you even if it isn't this story.I loved Spike in this story and the way Xander grew up all throughout was also great.
person Sagana
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful, captivating story. I'm glad that plot bunny insisted on being finished. I agree that there should be an epilogue - maybe a visit to Sunnydale six months later??? Either way, I look forward to reading more of your work. You are a very talented writer!
person Mandylynn
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. I've been reading it and following it since day one, but I don't know if I ever gave feedback. I look forward to a sequel bug striking you sometime soon...*hint, hint*

Luverly story.

Mandylynn
person nightengale1824
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update as always. I will certainly be sorry to see this one end and happy at the same time. Thanks for the update.More soon please.
person Discord
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, wait a sec! Only one more chapter! *pouts* I don't want you to stop!
person TheShadowCat
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Giles to screw everything up. Again. Great chapter, please update soon.
person Lily
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no!

I nearly cried when I read that there's only one part left :(

Is there any amount of praise that would convince you to write more? *is no opposed to begging*