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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated, yea! I'm happy. Bubbles fill my bloodstream and not the bad oxygen kind that kill. I'm sitting on the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter. So did that last little sentence mean Xander's going to try something he's trained to do in the shower and it's going to piss Spike off? And what, or should I say who, was Spike looking for at those auctions? Another Scoobie that went missing? I don't know but I really want to so write, write, write!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let the muse tickling commence. This a wonderful origional story. Please update soon.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this was updated so quickly. Well, it might not have been quick, but it certianly was for me, considering teh fact that I only read the first three chapters earlier today. I love this story. I must come back and read more. I cannot express how good this is. I'm a lover of originality, and I've never read anything like this. Hmmm. Do you think there's gonna be a visit from another of teh scoobies? Imagine how horrified they'd be... heh heh. Anyways, great stuff.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a shocking piece, seeing Xander so broken. I am really intrigued, and want more!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::worships at the holy keyboard of the amazing and talented Litgal:: Please please please please write more! I rather like Broken!Xander, and this is one of the best I've found. I really really want to know why Spike was making the rounds of all the slave stalls. I would like to see, maybe sometime in the fic!future, is Spike and Xanny meeting the Scoobies. ::raises offering of fancy chocolates and naughty pic manip of Spike in chaps and chains(yummy)::
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have me addicted to all of your stories now. My guess is that spike is looking for willow. cant wait for the next chapter.
Kizuna
Kizuna
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you got to write more love this story:)
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I totally love this story! You have to post a lot more and quicker, I really want to know what is going to happen! Please please post tons more!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A delicious fiction!! Well contructed and beautifully populated with wonderful characters and plausible story!
Many thanks for sharing your talent - please...Please... continue!
Cheers
J
Many thanks for sharing your talent - please...Please... continue!
Cheers
J
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. please continue.
bite16
bite16