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ohh please more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i really like this story!!

I like it. The way Xander's thoughts flow is nice. I wish you would write what Spike's thinking.

Awww, Spike is getting all sentimental on Xander's behalf... how sweet! I'm very curious as to what is going to happen next with the story. With many Spander stories, there is usually some sort of romance involved but so far in this story, it's simply master and slave. Actually, I would love for a romance to evolve between these two, they are awesome together. Please post lots more soon, I want to know what happens!

Dear LitGal

This is *such* disturbing material yet *so* well written that it cannot help become the 'addictive' read.

Xander's internal dialogue and the juxtaposition of his training vs the maintainance of sense of self is compelling.

Spike as the reluctant hero and shocked former 'big bad', coupled with a beautifully depicted, gradually growing tenderness for Xander is just breathtaking.

Kudos.... and *please* more.... more!!!

Thank you *so* much for sharing your astounding talent.

Hugs

J

I am absolutely loving this fic. I so look forward to the next chapter, where we might find out a bit more about what has happened to the other Scoobys. Could it have been Willow that Spike was looking for? Or Cordelia? What has Happened!

And poor Xander. How he has been reduced. I like how you have Spike angry that Xander is like this, but not too angry to take advantage of his slave. This is definitely shaping up to quite an interesting fic.

Hoping for more soon.

Cathy

Awww, I feel so bad for Xander! He seems so lost with Spike. I wish that Spike would make up some new rules that would allow Xander to speak and to have some of his personality back. I also would like to know why Spike decided to buy Xander in the first place. Please post lots more soon cause I really want to know what is going to happen!

I hope the new entries mean this has been upgraded from plot bunny to full fledged story. I enjoy all of your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks for sharing your talent!

mmmmm....yummy. I really loved this story. You have an entirely original way of portraying a slave mindset that I haven't seen before and frankly, I think anyway, a far more realistic one. Most authors when they 'break' someone have them completely different and insane amoung other things until they are nolonger the character they once were in anyway. The way you write Xander is great, he's broken and he has a total petslave mindset but he's still Xander! Please write more soon, I love SpikeXander lovin' and when a broken Xan is involved its all the more fun for Spike, not the world's most stable himself, to fix him to some extent....happy sigh....Love the story! More soon Please!

Hey, I thought this was very interesting. I was a bit wary of clicking on it, but nice job, I wish there was more to read. Fantastic description and imagination there. I think you've really captured what it's like for someone to be broken. I can't wait for you to update again!

Love it, one of the best stories right now...