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Ohhhh.... {plucks another tissue from the box and sobs a little longer}

I *adore* Spike in this fic!

Your ability to make the most painful imagry vivid, compelling, poignant and completely enthralling is utterly extraordinary

The plot line is disturbing and intruguing - and just keeps climbing!

Thank you *so* much for Chapter 5...

And I beg you to write more again soon!!

Your devoted reader

Josie

Wow, some really powerful stuff there, especially the last paragraph. I like what you've done; I didn't see this coming. I also like that Xander broke his training for a bit. Part of me still wants him to sort of be less... you know? But I like him this way, too. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter.

I reall love this story,but if you introduce Willow and Tara back in,and I hope you do,please don't let them have been broken,that'd be kinda upsetting..i dunno,its your story,but Willow and Tara are like the innocent ones,and with Buffy dead,those two being subs aswell would be like theres no hope..

jus a suggestion..feel free to say "hell no" if ya want

Oh my god, that chapter was heartbreaking. Please keep going, I think my brain will explode if you stop now.

*shudder* Damn, girl, but you're good. Keep up the great work and update soon please.

God. Oh, wow. I have tears in my eyes. Not expecting that. If I was speaking out loud, my voice'd be breaking. So sad and so, so, good. Well done. Bravo. Keep it up.

so will you tell us how Xander got captured or why Spike stumbled into the auction?

I will definitely tell you why Spike is there and why Spike is going to Joyce and how Xander got caught and what made Xander break and lots, lots more. I just don't tell the story very fast, so sometimes it takes some patience as I wait 40 pages to explain a character's motive.

hurry up and write more.
ps. spike was looking for magickal females, so is it willow or cordy that he's looking for?
firey vixxen

You know, I'm very happy that you updated this. And now that Spike has him, I have to wonder what else Xander went through. I liked that glimpse of the first time he saw the cages, it'll be interesting to find out what else happened...and what finally broke Xander. (Though keeping that a secret is probably part of some mystery, darn you!) And seeing Spike's reactions to everything (through Xander's perspective) is interesting. Are you going to do Spike's perspective? Either way, the story's great and I can't wait to see what little bit you decide to reveal next...like the chip! Or something else...ah, whatever, I just hope you update soon!