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Chapters 6 & 7 - Utterly heartbreaking, disturbing, poignant, shocking and *beautifully written*!!

And.... Just when I thought there was hope!

Oh *please* write more soon!

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Wow, that was great. I like how that through Spike controlling him, Xander is gaining more freedom. And I love that Xander enjoyed the sex. Yay for him. Very good chapter. I eagerly await more.

Xander makes me so mad, he's just a poor little idiot. That was great chapter and i obviously an't wait for more, seeing how it is so great and i need refueling. Lets all laugh at my stupid joke. Hahaha.

Im afraid to read your Mangled bits fic, cuz of the girl thing is it gonna stay that way?
I really hate that, sorry.

Xander is going to repay Spike? Hmmm, that sounds interesting. Lol! I really like the way that Spike is thinking, teaching Xander how to fight instead of treating him like he is worthless. I t seems that Spike really understands how Xander's mind works at this point which is probably a very good thing considering Xander's state of mind. I love the way that the story is going but I'd love to see a lot more tenderness between Xander and Spike! It would be so cute cause they are adorable together! Anyways, please post lots more soon, I want to know what happens!

Good God, this is intense. I love it. I wish I knew about it earlier. It is amazing. Keep up the great work. It is soooo good. I`m gonna go see what esle you have up.

No! You stopped! Why did you stop? Keep going, keep going! I want, no demand, to know what Xander meant by that last bit! Write, write write!

Quite the disturbing yet captivating story. At first, I was very...leery...about clicking it, but as no one else had updated and there was nothing else to do... Never did recover from the dreams that night. Excellent style and very well done. Others commented on the slave/pet/Xander dialogue and I agree, unique and refreshing. The plot--and yes, something tells me there is one and it is still forming--is very addictive. Like watching a car-wreck without the actual horror-gore and messy clean up afterward. I find myself being plagued mostly by just what role Giles will portray in this. We know what happened to the Slayer, the Witches...a brief guess at what happened to Angel. So what of Giles? Why are Spike and Joyce so...strange about him? Please, do keep it up, even if you take your time...I can always throttle someone else out of frustration while waiting. I can't wait for more.

Oh, and...please do let us know what Spike and Xander do to the slave trainer. Personally, I keep seeing much what Xander had, turning Soldier Boys over to said trainer to get some revenge--then killing the trainer afterward--perhaps. But ignore me, this is your story. And I hope it keeps coming.

Yeah! You updated! This story is wonderful. More soon please.

So sweet. I love it.

Nice update, I love how your working Xander's progression! S/X fun time PLEASE!