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for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

by LitGal

person Christine
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I feel soo bad for Xander! What the hell are Angel and Giles doing?? They need to leave Xander alone, and stop threatening him and just let him be with Spike. I hope that Spike gets him back and proves to him that he wants Xander, that he isn't just another obsession. Please post lots more!
person Fan Girly
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are they trying to break what was left of Xander?!!?!?!?!?! They are not trying to help him! It seems like they are doing nothing but hurting him because they are pissed about their own situation!! Angel and Giles in this are assholes!!!!
person E
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, now I?m really hating Giles and Angel. Hope that they either realize how wrong they are (preferably in a rather humiliating or embarassing fashion) or that one of the others just beat the crap out of them. Possibly they could kill them:) Making Xander doubt Spike, so not liking that... Hope there?ll be more soon. This is a wonderful story.
person Leah
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Sniff sniff" I think I will need more Kleenex if I continue to read this one. I love it and can't wait for more. Why Oh why will they not see that Spike is what Xander needs. More please soon.
person Alice
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, that was sad, seeing Xander slip back again, and then seeing Giles so broken. Its so sad seeing them so angry and distenced. I have so many questions: will Xander talk to the Watcher counselor, will they agree with Spike or Giles, will Giles get better, will the Girls be okay? Ack, my brain is leaking. Please hurry and update!
person Kiana
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! He's out of the hellhouse! The last couple of chapters were making me tear up. Please post soon!
person Christine
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Joyce!! That was awesome, I'm sooo happy that Joyce went and got Xander from the mentally upset Giles. Now, I cannot wait until Xander and Spike are reunited. I hope that Spike finds out about some of the things that Angel and Giles said to Xander so that he can prove them wrong by telling Xander that he wants to keep him forever. This chapter was soo awesome, I'm soo excited for the next one. Please post the next one, like NOW!
person Discord
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dead silence* Those bastards!
person TheShadowCat
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I certainly hope Joyce can knock some sense into Giles and Angel, but I doubt it seeing as she doesn't even understand. They're still bleeding idiots who both deserve swift kicks to the caboose. Now, with that rant done, please update soon.
person Shame Ness
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you made me cry, and i have to go to class to. I hate you!!