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Read up to the current 14 chapters. Bloody good story thus far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update ASAP! I'll check back with it again soon.

I like the way you write this story, though there are a few spelling errors here and there. I could point them out... but its unlikely you or I want to take the time and correct every minor spelling and grammar error.

Wow! I really like this story though its hideously brutal... I certainly am glad I don't live in that world. Well written, by the way. I'm only on chapter five, but I intend to come back to this again and keep reading. Until your done writing it. KEEP up the GOOD WORK!!!!

(I'm not even all that familiar with Buffy, never watched it much when it was on TV. Not that I didn't want to. Just not good at watching TV shows on a regular basis. Plan on getting it Season by Season, just like my other fave TV Shows....)

Anyway, despite not being too familiar (only seen a few full Buffy episodes), I was able to follow most of what was going on quite well. I think I did see the episode that Buffy died in, so I take it that this is around that episode's time? I vaguely remember that and the business of Spike's chip. But again, I was never an avid Buffy follower... woulda liked to have been, but my ability to remember TV shows and dates and such always lacked, even with my other fave shows. The only two shows I ever consistently was able to watch on my own, a few years back, was 'Stargate Sg-1' and (going much further back) 'Are You Afraid of the Dark?'

My usual TV-watching is limited to Hit-and-miss, mere chance. Enough of that though...

Update ASAP. Whenever you next can. Thanks.

*Shudders* at the amount of discomfort and such cruelty poor Xander and the other demons' slaves and would-be slaves had to go through.... I think I'd rather die right away than go through all that.

YES! AN UPDATE! Oh happy day. Wonderful chapter. Update soon please. I've become addicted to your story and I go into withdrawal if you take to long posting. Is that sad or what?

PS - This story is now on my recommended reading list.

wow, action. I'm getting excited, but scared of what will happen when they find the girls. I hope they'll be okay. I'm so ready for more.

YAY for Xander getting away from Giles cause that was sooo not healthy. I look forward to your next update.

Joyce to the rescue.... I can't WAIT for their reunion !!!
I have at least three scenarios in my head, but I'm sure you will surpise me.
I'm serious, you have me hooked. GIVE ME MORE !!!!

Recommended reading lists -- That took me the longest time to figure out myself.

Click on the story you like and look at the address. The address should end with a series of numbers. For Broken, end of the address looks like
php?no=544181666

The number "544181666" is what you want. Log in and go to your recommended reading. Put in the numbers and hit update. If the numbers are correct, the name of the story will appear next to the box.

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Thanks for all the feedback on this guys. I have been incredibly jazzed over how much attention this piece has gotten and I really appreciate everyone taking time to drop me a note. I read these...a lot...more than I should.

Wow, Xander driving. That should be interesting. Having to make all those snap judgements. Could help Xander, but who knows. Anywhoo, another exciting chapter and I want more.

I would love to put this story on my recommended reading list, but I haven't a clue on how to do that. At any rate, great chapter, please keep them coming.

WOO HOO! WAY TO GO JOYCE! Great chapter! It figures that a woman would have to fix things. Men can be such dopes. Please update soon.