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for White Lie

by Janina

person pixiecorn
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooooooo awesome.

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update real soon. i love the way you created lornes caracter that is so mad. lol

keep up the good work
person Cin
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the Madonna scene in ch. 26 had my stiffling my laughter as i read it at work. nice touch. this story is going so great. thank you for updating so often. i check daily. :)
person spikestheman
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWW, must say Madonna now that was a surprise!!!But I loved the singing and really liked the idea of Fred, though I may never get my SPUFFY, but I suppose shee does have to give him a little reward for all that singing hey???? Dont toy with me now Brat WE WANT DETAILS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and keep up the fabby updating you truly are THE BEST!!!!
person aliciaspiked
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So that was officially one of the best chapters of fanfiction I have read to date! Just thought I let you know. I have tears in my eyes I'm laughing so hard!
person pixiecorn
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved that. it was so cool. i was actually laughing.

picturing JM singing that song lol thats awesome.

i really hope you update asap.

keep it up.
person HelenaMalfoy
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL

Picturing Spike anywhere near the term "virgin," and not having it involve him thrusting or grunting in an act of taking, makes me smile. More story!

J'adore!
person shelly
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Glad Harmony got yelled at by Joyce and Spike! I can't wait to see spike and buffy get together at last! I'm sure it will be very sweet and sexy!
person Leonora
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! That's hilarious. God, u r good.
person lovesbitca37
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Can't wait for the spuffy action now :) Fred and Jonathon- thats so sweet!
person horsebuddy1888
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!! Your story is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!! It was so romantic and perfect that I cried! I hope you're going to continue it! Please Update soon, I'm begging you.