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for White Lie

by Janina

person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, awesome, just awesome. thank you so much for updating regularly, it keeps me intrigued!
person aliciaspiked
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love that Lorne! I am getting really excited about whats going to go down at the wedding. Hope we get to read about Lorne helping them get ready. Please update soon!!!
person Aisling
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! cute but hot! luved Like A Virgin LOL :D more soon babe cya xx
person feistypumpkin
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! Yeah!!
person raven
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
virgin
*snicker*
like a virgin... rotfl!
person spikestheman
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!Just loved the Spuffy Brat8, I was having a lousy day and then I saw your update...it has helped brighten my day...thanks...cant wait for the morning after, wedding, more Lorne,Harmony, Angel and Cordy...you go girl!!:)
person spikestheman
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!How can you leave it there, oh you are evil Brat8!!! Now honey not that I am one to complain but I really thought it was a faux pau to have Spike( after you had clearly said he was drunk)drive home...I dont want to be a pain about it but once you have lost people you love to a drunk driver it does make you a bit touchy...anyway sorry to darken the mood but the rest I loved ...just would have loved a little bit of Spuffy...roll on chapter 28!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved this:)
person Catt
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that chapter was so sweet. I am so looking forward to the next morning. I am loving this story, and I am looking forward to the wedding and the fireworks that are mabey to come. should be interesting. cant wait for the update!
person aliciaspiked
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wrote their first time beautifully. I was worth the wait! I can't wait to read more and to see what happens with Harmony's wedding :-) More Spuffy and Lorne please :-)