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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DONT MARRY HER.

lol neyway that was an awesome chpt and i hope you update real real soon

I thought the premise was rather cliched and almost passed this by, but I thought I'd taste the first chapter just to see and ended up reading the whole story (ch.29 to date). You've trancended the cliche admirably. I love the humor, very well done. Mostly I love, love, love the characterizations which feel very true to life. You don't indulge in character bashing (except maybe Harmony, so OK), with a lot of the drama and angst due to the clear, understandable, and, most of all, unforced, misperceptions of the characters. I'm thinking most of all of your characterization of Joyce, but the same thing applies to all the characters. I went back and read one of your earlier stories and while it was good, I can see that you've really grown as an author.

you definately do not choose proper moments to end a chapter
of course, i shouldnt be complaining since you have so kindlly posted everynight/day
I really look forward to the chapters you post up everyday. I call it, my highlights of the night (if i had a busy day) or day (if i'm just plain lazy).
Thank you very much and I hope I can read more of this soon!

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to review as 'ANON'. I wrote the last review.

damn! i luv Lorne :D cya xx

ACK!! Get him away from harmful!! Soon! Nice Spuffy WAFF btw. Like the little bit of smut you've doled out to us so far. Keep writing.

awwwww!!Poor Johnathon, hope Fred comes in to save the day so to speak!!Hey, there doesnt need to be NO wedding does there??Cause I know two people in the church that are ready to go, dont you???????????????? Anyway I hope we get that post wedding Spuffy, keep it going Brat just lovin it as always!!!

I love this story, and I can't wait for more.

i love this story. the previous chapter was just...wow. and i love how u worked Lorne into it, it's wicked funny. can't wait for another update :)

wonderful!