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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGoddess, can you stop giving me false hope? I was ecstatic about this plot! That is, until I found out who wrote it...
Can you please just ATTEMPT at putting one iota of thought into your fan fiction? I hope to Goddess this is supposed to be some joke that you think you can write or that you parody the fan fic/Buffy (but like someone else who reviewed) I severely doubt this.
And oh no, Tara would NEVER do this. Spike would be the one seducing her, if anything; period or not. Granted, I don't mind the whole 'earing your Red Wings' fics, but damn... this is horrible - just as your other one was.
For the love of Hecate, stop whatever it is you are/were trying to do.
Can you please just ATTEMPT at putting one iota of thought into your fan fiction? I hope to Goddess this is supposed to be some joke that you think you can write or that you parody the fan fic/Buffy (but like someone else who reviewed) I severely doubt this.
And oh no, Tara would NEVER do this. Spike would be the one seducing her, if anything; period or not. Granted, I don't mind the whole 'earing your Red Wings' fics, but damn... this is horrible - just as your other one was.
For the love of Hecate, stop whatever it is you are/were trying to do.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol...funny...i like the last line..hahahaha
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I?m still thinking about whether your dreadful grammar is meant to parody the genre or fiction writing in general, but somehow I doubt it.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Describing smutty sex in a rambling, disjointed way does not make a good story. I suggest that you spend some time reading really GOOD fanfic before you even attempt to write more.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok dude, as a chick and a chick lover all I can say is GOD DAMN THAT JUST AIN'T RIGHT!!! Seriously. But like they say practise makes perfect, can't please everyone but you could at least try.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's the best badfic ever! Well done. I love the random paragraph breaks, the way the dialogue all runs together, and the utter lack of credible characterisation, but my favourite part is that paragraph which is a single, unpunctuated sentence. Brilliant!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you bothered to punctuate, this would be merely abyssmal. It's not even funny, mockable bad. It's just bad.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate your effort, but you need some help with your writing before you continue to post. Your first problem is that the grammer is terrible. For a story to be interesting to a reader, you need to actually tell the story. There's little description of what's going on and what is there doesn't make much sense. I don't want to discourage you from continuing to write, but you need a lot more practice before you share your work with others. Good luck!