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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like where this is going! Please continue and do it fast!
But I really hope it;s going to be Fuffy ever after....
But I really hope it;s going to be Fuffy ever after....
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can't wait for More!!!!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ms. Ice,
I'm really enjoying this fic. You've got a good storyline going, nice dialogue, nice characterization, and great imagery. I love visuals. I could totally get a sense of Faith and Buffy's loft. I really like the interaction between the two as well; it's subtle, yet you get an awesome sense of closeness and genuine affection. I'm totally happy to see the way you developed the friendship. The flashback sequence was quick, easy, and well placed. The passage of time is also cool because you're constantly moving forward without glossing over too much.
I also love Buffy's realization and acceptance of her own jealousy, even if she only thinks it's in a platonic way. I hope she figures out that it's more than platonic soon, and makes sure that Faith knows it too, and drops Tracy. Faith loving Buffy and being sweet is always great to read.
There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there, but overall this was a very nice beginning to what is sure to a be a great fic. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you update soon. Very Soon!
I'm really enjoying this fic. You've got a good storyline going, nice dialogue, nice characterization, and great imagery. I love visuals. I could totally get a sense of Faith and Buffy's loft. I really like the interaction between the two as well; it's subtle, yet you get an awesome sense of closeness and genuine affection. I'm totally happy to see the way you developed the friendship. The flashback sequence was quick, easy, and well placed. The passage of time is also cool because you're constantly moving forward without glossing over too much.
I also love Buffy's realization and acceptance of her own jealousy, even if she only thinks it's in a platonic way. I hope she figures out that it's more than platonic soon, and makes sure that Faith knows it too, and drops Tracy. Faith loving Buffy and being sweet is always great to read.
There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there, but overall this was a very nice beginning to what is sure to a be a great fic. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you update soon. Very Soon!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit dude, this fic is awesome keep it going! I love it!!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha i luv it!! at least faith is finally gettin sum hehe. and she does spoil buffy too much. cant wait for the next chapt!!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Clueless Buffy and hopelessly in love Faith; always a good starting point. I like the post season 7 twist. I really the fact that Buffy and Faith are together away from the rest of the gang. It makes it easier to focus on just the two of them. I think Buffy being jealous of Tracy is pretty funny. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep going!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Quite well written....write another chapter, or i kick ur ass! (sorry, but most of my fav authors dont update frequently and its annoying) I look forward to reading more :)
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to read more. please update soon
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, cant wait to read the next part :)
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!! U totally had me wanting more..u are off to an awesome start & I can't wait to read more.