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for Obsidian Moonlight

by Melody21

person kay
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!! is it me or did the 2nd chapt seem a lil short? I'm not tryin to rush, by all means take ur time. i really luv the story! poor faith she's always too hard on herself
person Just Me
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - Love this story, please give us more.
person Taklerthanastump
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME... please please continue!!
person omnikool
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Faith must REALLY love Buffy because Tracy sounds hot!!! I like how Faith is all conflicted and scared and unsure when it comes to Buffy. She so afraid to hope for more not realizing the love is always a risk. You never know for sure; sometimes you just have to go for it and hope for the best. I'm looking forward to Faith going for it! Please update soon. Although this last update was really quick. Thanks!!!
person Black Haired Demon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this calls for more, wouldn't you say so...? emotional chapter this one. hmm.. i can't wait to see what'll happen next between those two
person Hayley
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story. Interesting setup! I'm curious to read where you're taking this one. Update soon!
person heart
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this!! more plz wicked story line and love the locations, you have a great imagination as to how the show would have played on, again love it more soon plz!
person greens
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2nd ch as good as the 1st.. I love the playful banter between the Slayers. This is fun & sexy. Awesome job..
person lele angel03
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this yummy they r so ment for one another
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo good so far. Please continue and fast!!!!