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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as i say i applauded you. i love this story and cant wait for more. i hope you have a sequal to this
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter the most. yes i did and cant wait for more. i loved how you wrote the sex scene. it was sweet. i cant wait for more so dont even think about stopping
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it alot. Is there going to be to the story? I hope so.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my goodness, it has been a long long long time since I have read a fic of this quality, with this type of storyline, it's right up my alley - this type of plot. And you have just mastered it so brilliantly. I've always wanted to write a plot like this, but my problem is I would go into too much detail with the little insignificant things - you have laid out the plot so brilliantly, it's just so wonderful to see that fics like this are still being written. The attention to the right details is so good, I am loving this. Only thing, which is probably a personal thing on my side - I find it difficult to follow when you switch from Buffy and Faith to 'Me' and 'You', I just find it hard to figure out which one is Buffy and which one is Faith, probably because I'm enjoying it so much I tend to rush!!!
Wonderful stuff, please update soon, and thank you for sharing!
Wonderful stuff, please update soon, and thank you for sharing!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. please keep updating
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, sorry about the threatening thing, but not a lot of ppl update. I appreciate that you did though :) Anyways, a great fic, well written. For once, I wasn't confused, and thats saying something, considering I've read every fanfiction on this site as well as about five others, and I almost always get confused. Though you sometimes went off mode (as my english teacher would say, bleh), I was never confused and I always knew exactly who was peaking. I have to commend you for that, most authors aren't able to accomplish this and end up not confusing the reader. This is the best fanfiction I've read in a while. I just read one that had every other word italicized, bold, or underlined. Makes me really appreciate the good stories. I look forward to reading more, please update soon :)
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg damn good chapter!!! Love it love it so much!!! Damn, smut and romance cant beat it. I envy you how you can write faith so well, seriously bonza scribble. More please, I wanna see how she breaks it of with whats her name! LOL, sorry, fuffy fills the brain cant focus on much else!! More soon plz i love this work.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tsssss, that was wicked hot! And I hope Faith will get rid of her insecurity and that Buffy will make it clear that she loves Faith too.
Please continue and do it now! Can;t wait to read how they;ll both react when they wake up.
Please continue and do it now! Can;t wait to read how they;ll both react when they wake up.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!!! SOON!!!! please!!! I really enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yahoo another chappi and so soon at that. i liked this chapter too and i cant wait to see tracy packing.