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for Obsidian Moonlight

by Melody21

person Kristen
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I say i'll kick your ass will that make you wanna update sooner? Well I can't really, but its out there. Loved the update, hated the time you made us wait. Anyway, nice update. WANT MORE!!!
person nate
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! please continue!!
person Ms Ice
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Nikki....yes i have read green quarter...and i have read the fic that uses that line...but i didnt rip it off from her...i swear it...
its a personal experience of mine between me and my bestfriend...although it is completely co oincidental and i understand where ur coming from i didnt mean for it to be set out that way...
if it helps i will go ask green quarter for permission...but i still place emphasis that i didnt use her stuff...i love green quarter and have always supported her work....
but thank you for bringing it to my attention and sorry for making you assume something like that...
i like to think my story draws from personal experiences but i do have to take in some other authors works...thanks though :)
Hopefully besides that i hope you enjoyed the fic... i cant have sucked that much ryt?? :(

Ms Ice
person Nikki
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i don't think this is the same author, so i thought i'd point out to you that, while i like this story a lot, you totally ripped off someone else's idea. there's a author that goes by 'green quarter' who writes diff fics, including Sam/Brooke stories from Popular. GQ wrote a series called 'An E
person Nikki
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry, i got cut off....

anyways, the series was called 'An Ever Fixed Mark' and I think it was in the story called 'Mercy of the Fallen' that the whole spoon thing comes from. Sam and Brooke use a spoon to declare their love and they say 'I spoon you.' Now I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but GQ is a great author who doesn't deserve to have her stuff ripped off and not get any credit for it. If you got permission from her or something, then totally disregard everything I said, but if you just took her stuff, I would just remove that out of respect for both GQ and yourself.
person J
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok you def. have to write another chapter to this Fic. I hate it when they don't have happy endings!! :-(
person Mike
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, love the character focus, love the characterizations.

Don't consider this story "AU", since, well, it covers a part of the Buffy Saga that doesn't have a canon you can be an alternative of, if you see what I mean. :)

Can't wait for more, think you are evil in a Jossian way for ending with that cliffhanger in Chapter 4, and eagerly await your next words.

Please, keep writing! And I put in a vote for a Happy Ending(TM)... Our Girls have been screwed over by The Powers That Be quite enough already, thank you very much. Oh, and you write a damned fine sex scene, and I wouldn't mind a few squillion more like it.
person Jenn
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is HOTT!! I like everything about it so far, and I can't wait for the next update. Keep it coming ;)
person jenna
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story so far...but i dont really like the ending of the last chapter lol...i hope your not making Faith all cheating...that would suck...alot...hope you update soon and i give you ********** stars lol
person jenna
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if you dont feel like counting the stars it was 10