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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo that was a good fic

I'm very surprised there aren't more reviews for this story. I suspect that's because not a lot of people are big Willow/Faith fans. I'm not either,but this story has completely captivated me. I absolutely love how you've worked in "real" events with your own story. All the relationships are great,I especially love the friendship between Buffy and Faith. I love how they are so prickly one moment,tender the next. It seems to fit them,and I think all the characterizations have been on the money.This has really been an intriguing story with lots of twists and turns,and I can't wait to see what's next.

I really like this, but I can't really see any way for you to link the beginning with the the events that have already happened. You say that Faith claims she doesn't love willow and willow believes it, in the first chapter, but the letter faith leaves in this one is hard evidence of one of the several instances that seems to make that impossible. Also at the beginning it seems like the story will be about their finding their ways back into each other's hearts, which I've gotta say really intruiged me. Now it looks like you've lost that thread, and have just embarked on a new one. It's not bad, but I was really looking forward to the original one. Either way you should pick one and stick with it. If necessary revise the first few chapters to eliminate the inconsitinsies. Thanks, look forward to reading more.

This is fantastic stuff, it really is. I've read most of your previous fics and occasionally they've felt a little too much like they're just (very well written) transcripts of the episodes, but this one has a nice balance. I both love and hate the depth of your writing - love it for the quality and strength it brings to the story and characters, hate it sometimes because it can mean it takes ages to read the chapters! :)



I hope the little warning you insert at the start of chapters about the potential for character death proves unnecessary in this story - even if they are only fictional characters, two people who've gone through such agony deserve to emerge on the other side.



Anyway, please keep writing - the last thing I want is to see the story left unfinished.

never could get into faith/willow - i'm a hopeless fuffy shipper. however, if anyone could get me to read fillow fic it would be you, norwalker. you're a gifted and natural storyteller. there isn't a fic you've written that i haven't always loved. keep up the good work (and use your powers for good and give us some fuffy stuff). ;o)

this is a really great story, very original keep going with it. please...