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by norwalker

schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An awesome story i loved every minute of it ur very good at adding twists to your stories and its nice seeing dark willow back i miss her but all-in-all a wonderful fic.
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i liked it. ok ok more than liked it i've been glued to the screen for days. litteraly.



gatta say was loveing your little 'pulp fiction' way fo telling the story. Tarentino would be proud.



and the happy ending. allways love a happy ending especialy after all the crap they went through.



also LOVED the way you tied the begining into it when i though you'd just forgoten about it. thats some memory you gatta love it.



ok i think that enough praise for now dont you? it's never enough but i can see myself going on for a few pages and if i do that i'm going to be dragging you away from writing anything else which i will be reading :D



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person lilyme
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, today is like Christmas, Easter and birthday in one! 27 chapters (or so) of Fillow-y goodness! I can hardly believe it. I'm one of the biggest Fillow-freaks ever :))

And why didn't I stumble across this story before?! Now I know what I'm gonna read in the next few days.

I know one thing: I love this story already :D This is going to be good (I can tell because I know and love a lot of your other stories already!)
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs content* I'm so happy it had a happy ending for them. Goddess this fic was very, very intens lots of heartbreaking moments. I found myself brushing some stray tears a lot throughout this fic.... It rocked me to my core!

You're good, you're VERY good at writting these fics you always manage to write something mind BLOWING!!! With all the good ingredients, romance, tragedy, action, sex....., your fics got it ALL!!!!

And I can't wait for the next one and I really hope it's a Faith/Dawn (an off age Dawn afcourse) fic this time around.
person Distantskyking
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now here is something that I don't agree with so I quote Aberahamtulip:



Aberahamtulip says:
I honestly feel like this is a terrible ending for this fiction. There's so much you haven't really dealt with.



Distantskyking answers:
I don't feel/think this is a terrible ending of this fiction and there might be so much the writer hasn't dealt with that may be true, but THAT only makes the possibility for a sequel that much bigger.



Aberahamtulip says:
And the time jumps near the end just make this worse. In fact they make the whole thing very unbelievable.



Distantskyking answers:
hmm.... haven't really been paying good attention have you?! *arches left eyebrow* probably not anyway....



Aberahamtulip says:
In the future I'd try and keep the time line more compact, because even with true love a relationship will die within a month of not speaking. And even if it wouldn't in real life, it seems unbelieveable when it's read.



Distantskyking answers:
Now THIS really, really is bull what you're saying of course true love won't die within a month of not speaking or else it wouldn't have BEEN real love all along *roll eyes* to begin with (duh) ttsss....

No it wouldn't in real life I know examples and you know why it's so unbieleable when it's read.....? That's 'cause most of us people in real life DON'T know what REAL LOVE is, we DON'T know the value of REAL LOVE, we fall in love to easy and we fall out of love that much easier, we are always confusing "to like" with "to love", but do we even realise that those are two different things? Probably not! And so we might never get the real meaning of the biggest emotion in the universe......

person Alison
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'm sorry it's over. A sequel would be great, or maybe you could do a fuffy story of such epic proportions as this one cuz I loved this fic even when W/F isn't my fav pairing, so image how spectacular a B/F would be. :P
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this story,and I'm not a fan of Faith/Willow at all. Not sure what the person meant who said even true love relationships can't last through a month with no talking. Of course they can,and in this fic it made all kinds of sense. Nice job!
person Rich
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't think I've seen something more set up for a sequel since the last X-Men movie :)



Seriously, that was great and, I think it would be fair to say, epic. I think that the only thing that limits the reviews you get is people don't have time (or the inclination) to read such long stories, but you make it worthwhile. It felt like you were losing your way once or twice, but it always came back together, and at least you had the decency not to kill anyone at the end!
person Aberahamtulip
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I honestly feel like this is a terrible ending for this fiction. There's so much you haven't really dealt with. And the time jumps near the end just make this worse. In fact they make the whole thing very unbelievable. In the future I'd try and keep the time line more compact, because even with true love a relationship will die within a month of not speaking. And even if it wouldn't in real life, it seems unbelieveable when it's read.
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still really enjoying this story. I love all the twists and turns,as well as the intense emotions between the characters. I've never been a Faith/Willow fan,but your story has me completely captured. Nice work!