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by wright99

person blackie
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a very good written story.
loving the mystery...
person allie
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is as wicked awesome story i hadnt read it because i thought it was dumb. but i started reading it last night and its really good story its very interesting. it kinda sounds like the x-men mixed in with it. i like the faith and willow reltionship. because i am usually a faith and buffy fan ,but this is a good with what you have put. i like the faith changing and reacting around willow. its cute and interesting. keep up the updates because i can not wait for more of your stories or chapters. can you make a buffy faith one of this? i would appreciate it. so far everything is good. and i like your writing. keep up the good work. xander is an asswhole. yea faith beat the shit out of him. whoops. even though cordila's mean she still doesnt deserve to get treated like that.peace outz
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again cool beans!! i'm loving this fic, original, new and some what sadistic, love it!! You're not leaving any hints huh, keep us guessing! How'd you make Xander so creepy?? Keep it up I wanna read some more!!
person multipass
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank's Heart, the only clue i'm giving is that xander gets more sadistic. sorry if you're a xander fan
person heart
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a bonza story! I like the all mysterious build up, really wanna see where this goes!! yay originality!! yay you!!