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by wright99

person allie
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally. i have been waitin for a long time. and i cant wait for some fiath and willow action. i cant wait for the next chapter.
person a
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked story. i love it and i can not wait for the next chapter.
person Daratrazanoff
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Going good. I think you should have Cordy get Veruca, have her take Veruca up very high and then drop her in the deep of the lake. Make Veruca lose consciousness when she hits the water and make her die or something. Also do you think you could make all the animal based ones have human mixed with animal thoughts when changed. And maybe make it once they have human thought when animal make so they can change at will. please consider my ideas and email me with your answer at dark_blue1984@hotmail.com, thanks.
person allie
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i want more faith and willow. i cant wait for the next chapter. please hurry
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want some faith and willow time. they didnt get anything. anywhoes i love this story and i cant wait for the next one
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want more. iwant more. i love this fic and i cant wait for more. please update soon because i wants to read more of this faboulas fic.
person allie
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaaaaaaa another chapter. i love it and thanks for updating i thought you forgot or werent pleased with the reviews or somthing. please hurry up and put up the next chapter please. i cant wait to see if williow is in heat or not. oh and just wondering is angel buffy's mate or not. becuase it would have to be a living person right? i mean faith is human and she and will's are mates and stuff. soo very good chappy and cant wait for more of whats to come. sooo peace out.
person sandra
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love your stories. i just started reading them and i am hooked. they are so good. i cant wait for more of it to appeare. i like that faith has a penis. its funny. and buffy who is her mate. can it be faith too. i know wills is her mate but can she have more than one mate? because angel can't be her mate because one he is died and too thats wrong. dead flesh going in you and ick. anyways i praise you on your writing andi cant wait for more of it to come sooon.
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great great grerat grea great great story i loveeeeeeeeeee it. and i cant wait for another sooo please hurry up and post another chappy.
person daratrazanoff
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Are Faith and Willow, Cat shifters or Were-cats? When do they change? Faith looks like she has her cats strength. Only thing I find wrong is the Veruca's wolf form was larger than Faith's panther form, there is no way that based the way they are that the wolf would be larger than the panther. Could you please tell me the reason? When are you going to update? Could you please answer my questions? You can tell by answering by emailing dark_blue1984@hotmail.com Thanks. Once again, love the story.