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for Leader of the Pack

by hollowtear

person Scented Candles (not logged in)
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, this was so cute, i loved it from start to finish, I also liked the slight, (slight being the keyword here) lime you put in there, but still it was very enjoyable
person becky
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute!
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I felt cheated after reading this. I think it was rushed, and didn't have to be so short. Also, we don't exactly get to see Spike in the "leader" role as much as him just being the alleged bad boy. Maybe a different title... I think you should go back and fill in the gaps- and make me happy please.