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NO!!! you left me hanging! please please update very soon!

I hope you update soon. I have been tracking this story for a while and I was hoping you could update a little faster. Great story though!

o my god... o my god... how could you just leave us hanging like that???? AHHH UPDATE NOW!!!! AHHHH

YUCK! You had to get Harmony in here didn't you. What will Spike do to her in the middle of the night? If she is at all sensible, it could be a lot more fun than the fantasy she just indulged in. More please.

This is proving to be a really tense, and frustrating, story. Can they have any more miscommunication?! Will Dru's obvious dislike of Buffy result in serious harm? Having Dru and that godawful Sheik Khari Ahani in cahoots could spell a heap-load of trouble for them all. I didn't like Spike servicing Harmony while Buffy was in the room. No matter the provocation, any man truly in love with a woman should have more honour than that. I saw that as terribly hurtful and it would be something I would never be able to forgive, even if all of the misunderstandings were cleared up later. If I'd been Buffy, I'd have ripped Harmony away from Spike and beated the crap out of him for pretending to care for me and then taunting me like that the very next day!
I'm addicted though. Great adventure. Just want them to get to a point of understanding soon! Thanks for the entertainment, pet. *smiles*

holy crap! notttt good. not to mention embarrasing beyond reason! moreeee please

Okay, I'm very upset right now. I understand that Spike's actions with Harmony were to make Buffy jealous but god I almost got sick to my stomach reading it, almost as if I was Buffy myself. It was really hurtful. Also, were Harmony's welcome presents just to make Buffy jealous again? Because, I mean Buffy showed up at this place under very different circumstances and was met with way less, its a bit disconcerning that Spike could be *that* cold. The ending to this chapter was pretty good, I'm really interested to see what happens between her and Spike. I really hope you can get things sorted and put some of the blame on Spike please. Yes, I know Buffy missed a lot of what he said but it was a genuine accident on her part. Spike set out to deliberatly hurt her [well sorta, lol] so though I'd like to see them sort this and begin a tentative relationship. I would like to see Spike - I don't know something - for hurting Buffy the way he did, in this last chapter.

Either way - another fabulous chapter!

I've been so happy about the past 2-3 chapters showing up pretty fast. So I hope to see another update again really soon!

that was really really good. i hope you update soon

I like this story a lot. A new twist on an old plot.

Regarding this part (which I realize you got from the show):"Spike would have arched an eyebrow at her and replied something witty like, "The day you suss out what you do want, there'll probably be a parade. Seventy-six bloody trombones." [Trombones? Why did she come up with trombones in her fantasy? She had no idea, but it sounded so much like something he would say]."

That is actually a song from the musical "The Music Man." The song is called "76 Trombones." So even if Buffy was making up that part in a fantasy, the song is still real.

I don't know if I've reviewed before, but I love this fic. I can't wait to see how Spike reacts to the latest treachery Buffy has performed.