rate_review Reviews

Took a bit longer than expected because first Mariana was ill and then I was away for a couple of days because of my project, and then I couldn't access AFF for some reason. Well, here it is at last, hope you enjoy it.

I really like your story... I just wish you wouldn't keep disappearing so long between chapters. Keep updating and i really liked the last chapter.

Damn!! Don't you just want to slap Buffy! Great story - can't wait for more!

This is an engaging premise and the setting is colorful and well detailed. I'm more relaxed about the sheik now that his secret's out. You've fleshed him out, and Buffy's new knowledge will make a relationship with her captor much less repellent. Khari, Jr. and Buffy's relationship will be a lot of fun to explore, too. I can't wait to learn the other roles the harem plays in Khari's life and work. Nice job.

I haven't had a lot of time to write lately because of a big project I'm working on in RL for which I have to do nothing but research and writing and I couldn't fit creative writing into my schedule. I just sent out my new chapter to my beta Mariana. Can't wait to see her suggestions. Fortunately my beta wasn't affected by the inundations that took place in her area. But since she's got a lot of work in RL, it will take a few days for her to get to the new chapter. She hinted that maybe there could be hope for Sunday.
I'm revising the chapters I already drafted because some parts don't fit any more because of the new episodes I've inserted, but I'm optimistic my friend will have more beta work to do soon.
Am I going to kill off Dru and Darla? My world would be really boring without them, so for now that's a definite no.
What are Willow and Tara's roles? Are they just wives? Good, so the hints I've scattered over the past few chapters haven't been too obvious. Keep reading, they will have bigger roles soon enough, and they're not "just wives" ;-)
Thanks for reviewing, guys! Hope to give you your update soon. If you register for my yahoo list, you won't miss any updates. Check my profile.
Charlie

omg that chapter was soooooooo good. the enging wit spike and anya was awsome. that fact that he didn't know that stuff is great.please rite more soon please

Please update soon!!! I've been waiting over a month for the next chapter. This story is really good and very original. I hope you keep going with it! :o) Shelly

How 'bout this is really good. I really like it. Please update soon! Are you going to kill off Dru and Darla, please say yes.

Ey babes! i luv r series! update soon! :D

I love your story so much! It really stands out among other Spuffy stories. Please, update soon!!