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AAArggg!!! You can't leave it like that. Please update it soon.

I'm sooo glad you finally updated this story!!!!

This was a wonderful chapter and it didn't seem awkward at all to me, everything flowed perfectly.

I loved Willow's distress that her 'Gaydar' wasn't working.

I love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you very much for continuing the journey! Went back to 6, then to 5, then on to 8, and now we're all caught up to the now, so I'm only worried about the where and when I'll go spastic when I begin to feel withdrawls from it being too long between fixes! Keep on Trucking.

This was a great update. I am glad to see ya update this story. I was begining to wonder! lol. It's a real great story. I can't wait to see where you go with it next :)
Keep up the great work!

awww... that's so sad! You have to keep them together!

Do hope we see some more soon, please. A lot of us are perhaps in need of another fix.

Well, I just reread 5, and with 6 and what Willow is thinking seeing them well... close...
Yeah, somebody is going to get hurt. Just who might get jealous of whom is a flip of a coin. The green-eyed monster looms darkly in both of them. And with the power they command...
And something to consider, dear author. Just a side thought. Depending on how you have this story evole and end, I could see two other stories develope, showing the girls on their own journeys. Before they make their way back to each other. Because I'm really curious how you'll handle Faith when she goes back to Boston.
Thanks again for the care you give your work.

Me again... with a profound thankyou for Pt 4, and for the whole story. It flows. Its' articulate, structured, and Fun to read.
I was thinking of my prior posting and adding a "But..." then and there, that maybe with how you ended Pt 3 one could let the story stand as is. You had already posted 4 so to the back of my mind it went. And with how the girls have barely `Rounded First` (thanks Moondancer! its still begging for more) I am beside myself with what you're going to do to them next. Please, just keep what you're doing well doing. You know, the pacing and all that. The youth of love or something like that. Just thanks.

Spelling is one thing, detail another. Pt 2 had the girls out trying to find a club and settled for what they did because it was Wednesday. Pt 3 when they went looking for the "muchachas" the next night, the `Pussycat Club` was closed. ?Oh no, Luis? mistake,? the driver apologized. ?Wednesday night closed.?
Sorry, but I'm quite the nazi for detail.